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Gehenna - Soboku Koikawa
2008-01-20
ch 4,
abuseI think it is Muerta, no da. Must write more. I am addicted...
Gehenna - Soboku Koikawa
2008-01-20
ch 2,
abuseI'm not sure quotes work with this, no da. But I'll try.

[q] "You can only tell so much about someone from a picture," Ashley was saying in a musing sort of tone. She tended to talk, prattle almost, whenever she could. Leon figured it was one of her ways to relieve a little tension and distract herself from the gnawing fear that he knew, from experience, plagued her constantly. "That one makes me look like. . . a cupcake."

Leon snorted. "A cupcake?"

"Yeah." Ashley hunkered down further against the low wall Leon had had her sit behind, wrapping her arms around herself with an almost comical pout on her face. "A Barbie cupcake." [/q]

Hehehe
Cassiopeia_87
2007-09-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is by far the best RE fanfic I've read. You capture the characters extremely well - what they say, what they do, their thoughts and feelings, it all fits perfectly. And the end of chapter one gave me chills.
"Just listening to the night, one could almost imagine they were simply sleeping under the stars, without a care in the world. And just listening to the night, Leon could almost believe it."
Beautifully written!
I hope you update soon, awesome work!
OTHx23xTigger
2007-08-05
ch 4,
abuseOk i normally only read fics about tv shows, but the other day i saw my brother playing resident evil 4 and well i was intrigued, so here i am, reading fics. Anyways on to your gorgeous story, I absolutly love the Ashley/Leon pairing, keep that up! and this chapter was amazing! the almost-kiss scene nearly killed me! I want moree!
~Update soon~
(Ashley and Leon is Love)
justareader
2007-06-08
ch 4, anon.
abuseKEEP WRITING AFTER 'SCARS'! woot!
justareader
2007-06-08
ch 3, anon.
abusenice.. I love romantically situated peices, so keep chuggin'
xvjafhafg.a
2007-04-07
ch 4,
abuseOh-me-oh-my, my favorite chapter. It was just so well written, dripping with understandable emotion and a good level of fluff. On a side note, the monks are chanting 'Muere, Muere', not 'Muerde, Muerde'. I speak spanish, so 'Muere' literally tranlsates to 'die', while 'Muerde' literally translates to 'bite'. And '...Die, Die...' seems more fitting than 'bite, bite...' doesn't it? Just a hint.
xvjafhafg.a
2007-04-07
ch 3,
abuseOh-me-oh-my, another excellent update!
xvjafhafg.a
2007-04-07
ch 2,
abuseOh-me-oh-my, not a boring chapter at all! This little chapter pretty much sums up why I never came to despise Ashley the way my friend and uncle (who lent me the game) did. It's also a rather accurate truth of what happens when a human is presented with danger and finds themselves caught up in it for long periods.
xvjafhafg.a
2007-04-07
ch 1,
abuseOh-me-oh-my, Aw, some very nice Leon/Ashley. It's hard to find the pairing, nonetheless having it written well. I'll admit to RE4 being my first foray into the RE-verse, so I just cant find much reason for Leon and Ada to fit together, while this pairing just works. The details are lovely and I love how certain passages go along a rhythm.
blazedsun
2007-04-03
ch 4,
abuseI LOVE YOU! =O

More I say!
Ada Adore
2007-01-19
ch 4,
abuseThis is so well written. An excellent insight into Leon's thoughts and feelings. I hope you update soon.
1wingangel
2006-12-23
ch 4, anon.
abusePlease update soon! PLEASE! There are so few good LeonxAshley stories... the only two I've read(yours included) are so good but so very short... I need more.

:3
Google Girl11
2006-12-02
ch 4,
abuseOh, this is cute...and they almost kissed...the stories don't really go anywhere, but that's ok, because it is my favorite RE pairing...and also the fact that Ada isn't a major character...she's too much of a threat to the ashelyxleon fandom...

Kazie-chan
2006-11-16
ch 4,
abuseThis is fantastic, I can't wait to see if there's more!
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