Reviews for Love's First Call

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The King of the Nerds 2008-01-20 ch 9,	abuse...What? Why must everyone in here be out of character? Really, if you aren't going to give a good reason as to why they're out of character, then you are not really a fan. This is definitely some of the worst characterization that I have seen.
MadamePika 2008-01-10 ch 9,	abuseWell, we all knew from ealy on that this would be quiet OOC but by now it's getting more than just a bit irritating. I think it might be best for you to just avoid writing about TK completely. I hate him too but the way you're making him act is well perfectic. Anyway, hoping that the next update is better.
Khajmer 2008-01-09 ch 9,	abuseIt's interesting, but my primary concern is the way you're throwing wide of the character's personalities. With the exception of the Digimon and a few others, the characters are being very OOC. I could kind of understand it if it was all from Daisuke's POV and was merely a misinterpretation (I've actually seen that type before and it was a really good one), but Hikari's being a bit of a selfish **, and Takeru is being kind of ignorant to Hkari's true feelings about him, a stark contrast to her generally selfless nature (remember Taichi's flashback, the whole thing with her apologizing to him for not being able to play soccer very well even though he made her really sick?) and Takeru's at least decent empathy. That's all I'm saying, unless you were going for that you might want to try hitting a little closer to home there.
Lord Pata 2008-01-08 ch 9,	abusePretty odd way to act from Takeru, I doubt he would be the kind of guy who would go for sex, let alone if the girl doesn't feels ready or with wished to do that. I know and understand people change but here there was a full 360° turn, all of them are all messed up, I think the only sane ones are the digimon and maybe Tai and the older group, from the new group I think only Cody, Ken and Yolei aren't that bad, but TK, Kari and Davis man, they sure have problems o.O But well maybe is just me ^^;
Lord Pata 2007-12-13 ch 8,	abuseDid I missed something? I mean when did Gatomon appeared? I mean she didn't got not even a mention on the first 7 chapters and now all of sudden she appears at the beggining of this chapter, no offence is just that I didn't saw any link with the chapter 7 other than Tai's accident, I mean this chapter started with Kari already in the hospital telling Gatomon to not say something, my guess that is what really happened that caused Tai that accident but dunno I felt it started in a kinda odd way, mostly since Gatomon didn't got mentioned at least in chapter 7 ^^; But maybe that's just me xD Also don't you think you're going too ** TK? now he is so easy to manipulate? anyone could say that Kari only used him to get Davis, and that sure talks pretty bad of her
MadamePika 2007-11-27 ch 7,	abuseUPDATE! SOON! Only just found this story and still interested though you might want to put the rating up a little bit. When is Davis going to get the baby? Will Aya return (and maybe date Takeru)? Aw poor Tai.
Gold Dragon 36 2007-10-28 ch 7, anon.	abuseCool chapter, R u gonna make Tai lose his memory? or just the concussion, either, awesome story!
Lord Pata 2007-10-28 ch 7,	abuseLeave it to Jun to trust in her "sources" since how Kari could push Tai if he was trying to reach her. Also about the TK/Kari/Davis thing Tai has a point, TK I'm sure he loves her so much, I really find OOC Kari saying he doesn't likes TK's company as she likes Davis' you make it seems like if TK was a suffocating her with his mere presence when I don't believe that. I mean as much people can change I doubt they would change for bad in that way, but if Kari didn't liked TK's company that much then why she accepted to date him? that's why Tai is right about her playing with both Davis and TK's hearts. If you ask me the only one to blame about both TK and Davis is Kari. Pretty interesting though I'm not really quite fond of Takari fics where TK results to be an annoying guy that didn't even stood for Kari's honor about those rumors at school just to have a way for her to end with Davis. It is not a flame, it are just my thoughts ^^
dynasty black 2007-10-27 ch 6, anon.	abusesuspense!
Lord Pata 2007-10-12 ch 5,	abuseErr, no offense or anything but don't you think you're going really OOC on Takeru? I mean for more he could change I really doubt he would change in that way to not stand up for Hikari's honor about those rumors, I'm really sure he never would abuse of Kari's trust in that way, let alone to drive the knife on Daisuke's back further when he is already hurt. The fic itself is interesting but on this matter it would have been better if you would have given Kari an OC boyfriend instead of Takeru, He never would be capable of suffocate Kari at the point she can't do anything without have him behind her on her heels. In all honesty all the TK bashing is what cause the Takari fans to bash Davis and viceversa, it is a neverending cycle. I'm not flamming you, indeed the fic is really interesting except for the bashing on TK.
SPARTAN-275 2006-10-19 ch 4,	abusenice...love all the heartbreak. so please continue
BlackHalliwell 2006-10-05 ch 4,	abusekool
BlackHalliwell 2006-08-17 ch 3,	abuseawesome
lord lazy pants 2006-08-13 ch 3,	abusei can't wait to see where this one goes. i like it. davix. a father. it makes me chuckel
Gold Dragon35 2006-08-01 ch 2,	abuseI know your busy but can you please update

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