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JennySol
2008-06-26
ch 41,
abuseIt took me several weeks to read the whole story you wrote.
I had already read Decided Bride and I was curious about the "Parents history". I really loved it.
I also know there is a third part, but is not finished yet, and over a year since last update.
I hope you find time to finish it.
My congratulations for your great story from Buenos Aires, Argentina.
Muacks
serenity rae
2007-06-04
ch 41, anon.
abusei'll tell you right now, i was crying when i finished this story, the second and third installment is awsome to, i love Serenity/Endymion fanfics, but this one is really unique, i love it. this story made me cry, laugh, and make my heart pound with the way you described selenity and kinostu's love. i read this over and over if i could. watch out for your spelling though, that 'll get 'cha.
review ya later,
Serenity
aznxprincess06
2007-04-24
ch 41,
abusestory was amazing! i loved it... you had quite a few grammar errors and typos, sometimes you would mix up selenity and serenity but i understood what you wanted to say... great story! i loved it! keep writing!
rose4usagi
2007-04-08
ch 31, anon.
abusesugoi! ang gaLING galing! ahahaha - incredible! wat a nice piEce! You're a great writeR!! woho! write sumthin bout Usagi ang mamoru as well! ahahah ;) mwaahh
the-lionness
2007-03-11
ch 1,
abuseoohh! i knew you were familiar. i read this and another piece on and i thought that you were fabulous! this is awesome. i loved it! it was soo sweet. please say you are working on The Untouchable Princess! :)
MegTao
2007-02-11
ch 41,
abuseThis story was beautiful, it brought tears to my eyes on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for writing this, I'm sure the third part will be equally amazing.
MegTao
2007-02-10
ch 33,
abuseI've slowly been making my way through this story, waiting until I reached the end to review but when I read this chapter... I just couldn't believe it. Selenity's brother...Hera and her two sons...Lady Mercury and her unborn child...all of them just gone. How could Mars agree to a treaty with that witch!! I just don't know what to think right now, I've really fallen in love with your characters. You've done a great job of writing their relationships and keeping the plot moving at a steady pace. Well, I'm off to read what happens next...
Elen-Di
2007-02-07
ch 37, anon.
abuseI want to cry. That was so sad! We all knew he had to die, but...
NO!
Elen
2007-02-07
ch 34, anon.
abuseNO!
symbolica
2007-01-02
ch 41,
abusefinally got to read the last chappie of part two. bwautiful. i really enjoyed it a lot! keep up the great work!
Miss Spazzmerica
2006-11-26
ch 41, anon.
abuse*cries* Sad ending! *cries s'more* 5/5, man, 5/5!

-Miss Spazzmerica
Miss Spazzmerica
2006-11-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhe! *does a little happy dance* It's a fluffy DarienSerena!!

-Miss Spazzmerica
Admiral Sol
2006-10-11
ch 41,
abuseThis story was totally outstanding. I give it Five out of Five stars and the Sun's seal of approval.

good luck with the next one.

Admiral Sol
srsmoon
2006-10-10
ch 41,
abuseI think AFLV is one of the longest fanfics I've ever read, but I loved every minute of it. Will I have time to re-read DB before the third part starts? I'd probably need a month to do it, work is crazy for me right now. If not I'll just read the last few chapters and try to refresh my memory. Thanks for the mention in your notes, and be sure to let me know when you're posting your new story! Until next time.
Nyght Musique
2006-10-10
ch 41,
abuseAHH i love you! i cant believe its over now!! I've been with this story since.. chapter like 15 and wow.. its over now.. i feel.. such loss..
I cant wait to read more of your work!! you are a terrific writer!
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