i read that you kind of have trouble updating quickly, so i hope that you WILL post another part soon, i think the emma/craig/ashley triangle thing should be really interesting to read about! and i'm also hoping it ends with emma and craig together! post soon!

I'm liking it so far, and Emma/Craig interests me. Keep going.

very good, keep going.

love it i love E/C fanfictions post more soon

wow this is really good so far!

This is really good so far. I hope you update soon!

~Felicia

This should be very interesting. I'm looking forward for more.

good start so far, please continue

Not a fan of the ship, but I'm a fan of the writing...You always seem to have great flow and everythings just written so well that you can't help but want more. I don't mind AU fics, so long as their well written, and more so when the characters are in character.

I'm looking forward to see what u have instore for this story. I'm a Cremma fan and also thought he should have went for Emma instead of Manny.