I liked it, but I didn't like how Alexis lost though lol.

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does jaden have his new deck in this and where is hasslebarrey and astar

I love it.

Yeah, it's me again.

Chapter 9-
Bit of a cliff hanger at the end! I wonder who's going to win... Anyway, I liked the detail of the chapter. Though I don't exactly know how things work in Yu-Gi-Oh, I could tell they were doing some really interesting playing just from imagining the cards and going through dizzying amounts of activity during the turns. I like it better when you put a bit of info at the end of the chapter describing the next, since this is kind of like a mini-series in a magazine. Keeps you coming back. Overall, a worthy entry into the series.

Oblisk, the fact that he had a sister gave away he was one of them:) How good of a dules are u??

Sweet I also made the gods take on a human bodye, but by me they are all three male

Great fic, but it also confuses me...Whi stands there Atemu and not Yugi?

Yeah, you know who I am. Anyway, this is some really good stuff. I love the way you start of each chapter beautifully. I mean, this is really good. My only qualm is that there are a few spelling errors (LOL).

Woo!~ Hah, Yugi finally shows his face again, eh? MWAHAHA! Awesome duel scene!

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GRR! That is SO GOOD! And I have Destiny Board F, and Spirit Messages "I, N, A, L" too. I've seen it played, but mine are new, so I haven't used them yet.

Sweet story, man! You're a great writer, you make my story look like dung.

it's "hawkins", just so you know, but this is getting pretty good!

THis is cool!