I only have one question and that is:

When are you going to up date? I really like this story, and would love to read more

In character and very well written.


I like it A LOT. ^_^

^_^ You did an awesome interpretation of that scene - you have quite the knack for making something so brutal as violence beautiful! ^^

you stopped?

I liked your take on the first 2 episodes.

Hey. Neat. Like the style, it's really original.

Well, to be honest the style of writing kind of makes the reader feel that they're looking through a mirrior and can see images but not hear. It gets kind of boring in the sense that there is no dialougue or that you are really connected to any of the characters. It's not really story-telling but more of a somewhat opinionated newspaper article. I mean, I like this kind of writing for one-shots and ficlets, but for longer fanfics, I like to get more involved with things to keep me wanting to read it. I think with what you have, and the obvious talent that you have, you could pull that off extremely easily. I don't think you should completely change the type of writing for this fic, but maybe to add just a tad more..."feeling" into it if you know what I mean, and if you want to analyze the episodes I would add more description and focuss on detail and thoroughness--food for thought. However, it is just so intriguing with how sophisticated you appear, that I just can't want for the next chapters. I know that I'll keep reading this regardless! I love the emphasis towards the end...there is where some things really shine. Please don't take my earlier comments personally--you are still my favorite Mugen/Fuu author :).

You write so poetically and beautifully. The way you write gaves great emphasis and picturesque detail. I love it! The very beginnig got me hooked, and brought the exact scene of Mugen walking in to mind--except this time it was much more incredible with how we see everything through Fuu's eyes. And I just adore Mugen/Fu! Keep writing! I think you are probably one of, if not THE best Mugen/Fuu author that I have seen to date (kimper being another one of my favorites). It is such a pleasure to read your works :).

You do this really well. I love it. I can't wait to read more.

(Thankfully I got to watch this episode) Once again you've left me wide-eyed and stunned. Your a great writer, and I am surprised that you'd take on the task of writing 26 insights into Samurai Champloo! Wonderful chapter, and I can't wait to read to rest!

Wow really good... I haven't seen any episodes on tv but like u know I only read the first volume of sc.any I knew what u were talking about in your first chappie but when I read your second I didn't know what u were talking but yeah I read what u said at the end n was like cool his my tv guide for sc hehehehe lol sorry me have tv.so that's how fuu got raped or had lost her virginity hehehehe well g2g please updated soon really really soon.

You're story summary was pretty interesting. "It began with indifference" It really captured the dynamic between Mugen and Fuu, ...as did the story itself. It seemed to me to be a very accurate observation of characteristics and circumstance. It was a good summary, but the thing is,summaries that go on too long begin to sound like essays, if that's what you mean to do, then by all means do it, I'm just trying to tell you my impression of you're story. But if you decide to go a different route then I would commend that desicion. It would provide readers more time to observe the story themselves and become more engaged, as oppose to having the story observed for them. I think a good rule of thumb in writing is that if you're trying to put across a concept then it's best if you don't even mention what that concept is, rather "show" it, through dialogue and description. If you need me. Holla at me through my e-mail.

Keep Chuggin.

Great story! Everything was good, I liek how u said the house got on fire(on the real story they didn't say how it got destroy)there were some words I didn't get but the rest I did anywaus nice story update soon really really soon.

Ps. What r dumplings?

Oh, I like! ^.~

me like me like ^^ its a geat and clean-cut fanfic that actually starts from the moment they first ever met. I like how its put XD