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Kyotohru135
2008-02-18 . chapter 1
what does bonito mean
Miz Valeer
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
Whew! *fans self* And what a well-written smutfest it was. :)
Shimo Ino
2007-10-12 . chapter 1
B-e-a-u-tiful...*sigh-drool* im, all like, tingly...this is good!
angst cupcake
2007-07-31 . chapter 1
That was hot...kinky three way!
Kalea CrimsonMoon
2007-06-30 . chapter 1
hot! (drool).
TomiSama04
2007-04-16 . chapter 1
Very. Very. VERY Good. This one will surely be added to my favorites and read again and again. Perfect, too! Man! I wish I had the talent to write sex scenes like that. I get all nervous... although a RaixJackxChase would go rather well in my story too...

Anyway. VERY good job! ^_^
avi17
2006-08-08 . chapter 1
Pointlessly smutty, yes, but not in a bad way. :3 Threesome lemons are, unfortunately, a (very) guilty pleasure of mine, and you pulled this one off nicely. Very sexy indeed.
TheUndertone
2006-06-11 . chapter 1
0.o AWESOME
NarutoBlackmail
2006-06-02 . chapter 1
O_O

*nosebleeds*

I FUCKING LOVE YOU

YATTA! *glomps and favs*
Blizzardrake
2006-05-20 . chapter 1
H.O.T! very! more! plz! lol *begs begs begs*
Mystery Reviewer
2006-05-11 . chapter 1
fkdhgfkjdfkd! Woah! That was so hot! Two of my favorite pairings... ;D
Rose Beloved
2006-04-18 . chapter 1
WOOHOO! -joins them-
Yay for Yaoi
2006-04-14 . chapter 1
Curse you! I absolutely love your stories, and it makes me wish I had someone to rp XS Yaoi with me. Jack is totally my favorite charie, then Raimundo, but I haven't quite seen Chase in the series yet, though I've seen a piccy. He is FINE! I'm only a novice at writing, don't think I'll ever be able to write stories quite like this, but this is definetly going on my favorites list, and you're going as a favorite author. ^_^ I also loved 'Angel' It's like, forbidden meetings in the night! Although I found it rather short, I still liked it alot! And I love how you play Jack as uke. For some reason, I can't see such a cute face being seme. -Cough- So good work! And I'm not saying Rai isn't cute, but I can see him more as seme then anything. I'll be looking forward to your future Rai/Jack stories and can't wait until your update on 'Caves of the Heart.' Until then Ciao.
The Token
2006-04-03 . chapter 1
I LOVED this story. I read the other one too:"Angel" You have such a talent of writing these Rai/Jack fics. I LOVE them. It was tight as hell.
*~The Token has Spoken~*
Yui Yamana
2006-02-25 . chapter 1
Okay. I'm sorry okay.I didn't mean to call you gay. I was just angry. Forgive me okay? Look I'm adding this story to my favorites list okay? Just forget this ever happened. I mean okay I didn't read the warning and I didn't see Jack's name. You were right. But I didn't say it was a bad story it is good. I mean I can't write like you so I'm sorry for what I said okay? Just please forgive me. I hate when people are mad at me. Please!! Forgive me. IT'S EATING ME UP INSIDE!
Chase: I love it when she begs.
Me: Shut it! *beats Chase with hammer*
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