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| The Lightning Flash 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuse“Well? You aren’t here alone, are you? Or are you with that young gel whatshername, Sparkle or one of those hippy names?” I LOVED that line. :D Nice fic. Somehow it seemed different to your usual writing. Not in a bad way, just . . . different. Interesting setting, too. I'd never have though of an opera!fic. Lovely job. :) |
| Scarabbug 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseExtremely enjoyable Sarah ^_^ it's not usually my type of fic but you added your own touch, and that made it entertaining for me. It was an excellent idea and I like the idea of the spire. Rather "disc-worldy", I think. Arachne - apt name for lady Illusion, of course. Did you avoid describing how her human morph appeared or have I missed something? I'm seeing blonde, blue eyes, :P seriously. Anyway enjoyable story with some lovely little touches and developed characters. Yet another one for the faves lise. Yoink. Scarab. |