LOL. nice story. if not alittle out of character, but it works. i can see where the ending would just be pretty much fluff. no need to complete. but thanks all the same.

Awesome chapter keep up the good worka and update soon!

What, no resolution? Aw, man.

Wow! I love this story! Please Please PLease continue it! It's a shame that a good story like this ends would just end. Please please please keep writing this story - I'd love to see how it ends. Please! >o

Aw gotta love love. MORE!

OMG, so didn't see that coming!

now i want a sword lol

Love the story so far!

I got to admit you are one of the creative writers I have come across. All of your stories are leaving me hanging and I cant wait to get more. So, let me say that it would be a delight to read anymore of what you have writen. I hope that you haven't stoped writing you have some real good talent.

*coughing fit* didn't expect that...

Oh please for the love of all that is holy update this story.

Oh, my! **fans self** I can't believe they were having fun while everyone was watching the movie. It was even funnier to find out most of them knew what the two of them were doing.

**snorts** I was waiting for Jayne to say "I'll be in my bunk" at the end of the chapter. I can just see him saying something like that after a conversation like that.

This, by far, has got to be my favorite Rayne fic I've read. I don't normally review every chapter, especial when the next one is already out, but there's always something in each chapter that makes me want to review. ^_^

Oh, I love where you're going with this. And I love your explaination on why River's crazy and what they did to her. It's perfect and makes perfect sense about what she does. Great idea to tie in the episodes, especially Ariel (which is my favorite).

lol! I love this fic so far and this is only the first chapter. River playing matchmaker will be fun to watch. And I love the fact that Simon is okay (if wary) of River wanting to have sex with Jayne. I also love the fact that the rest of the crew knows about it, and aren't going to stop it.