Wow - you weren't kidding with the graphic violence and language warning at the start of chapter 13!

12 was very nicely written too. I'd suspected Parker was a Clanner quite early on, with his fighting abilities and sense of honour (or else a very unusual Spheroid). Nice to have it confirmed...and in such an interesting way too.

One question: who was the crazy guy who attacked him in the woods? Is it revealed later or was he identified previously and I just missed it?

Great couple of chapters there. Liked the final battle with the CAMR and Evee's kidnapping is keeping things interesting.

I see I've still got a ways to go, so I can only imagine the story's future twists and turns.

Hey Baron!

I've got as far as chapter 9 and its still as intriguing as ever.

I've not read anything recent of yours, so I don't know if you've changed/improved your technique, but this story could stand some grammar and spelling checks.

Aside from that, its a great read!

Just picking this story up where I left off. Enjoying it so far and hoping I'll be able to get through the rest fairly quickly.

Very good can't wait to read the next story.

gunny

Good story.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Very good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter. Hope things get better for them soon.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Very good chapter.

gunny