Aw, this is really cute. I always loved the relationship between Shikimaru and Temari and I always try to find cute fanfics of the two that stays true to their character. This story is definitely one of it. I can very much imagine them acting like that too if they were to get together in the future. So, props to the story =]!

Hey, nice story. I just wanted to say that this isn't usually the type of story I go for (I'm more into the Adventure-Romance) but I found your story to be very touching. Good Job.

:3 that was cute. i love stories that have little blurbs and then it all is part of a reason, then you move on to another. its so fast, fresh, and adorable. lolz

good story, you might think about writting second one with temari pov

Cute!!

Wow. Nice. This is so cute!

That has got to be the cutest TemariXShikamaru fic

very cute. =)

this is one of my favorite shika-temarri fics
great going!

So adorable!! Great job with keeping everything in the right character. :D Definitely a fav!

Great story! I'm glad that there are some well-written Temari/Shikamaru fics out there that are a decent length. (Then again, I have no right to talk...) The characterization was really accurate too in my opinion. Their relationship wasn't as rushed as in some other fics and the grammar and spelling was all correct too. (HURRAY!)

I loved it!

uber uber uber...good. the style is perfect and the characters are spot on. good stuff all around.

Pretty good! I liked the new, more affectionate dimension that you've added to Temari, and yet you still manage to remain faithful to her character (she makes the first move, of course).

They're also very familiar with each other. Not warm, but casual. Very good work.

I really do hope that Kishimoto Masashi brings them together. Your story is really sweet.

me like. Go Shika/Tema^^