Umm... I guess it was good... but, I kind of felt that all the girls were just concerned about Will and her feelings, what about Cornelia?!?!? There happy she and her boyfriend broke up just because Will has a crush on him?!?! That doesn't seam very friend-like.

really cool... Some details were missing like how they escaped, what happened to phobos...stuff like that-not really important but... All in all, its a cool story, give yourself a cookie ^_^ thumbs up

Will's parents are divorced, stupid. nice story so far though, keep it up!

WTF!WHAT THE **!CORNELIA AND CALEB ONLY

Wow! Now THAT was cool! Really good story.

Hey, guess what: I read all of your stories! ^.^

great, absolutely great

i love it!

CUTE! plz rite more stories soon!

before i start dont hunt me down and kill me because of what im gonna say... WILL AND CALEB DO NOT BELONGE TOGATHER DID YOU EVER READ THE BOOK SERIES... ok well otherwise everything eles was fine good job^-^ just read the book series PLEASE!

I like a lot

The story is TOTALLY nice... But u made Caleb sound really naughty in the last chapter cause of what he did to Will's punch... Anyway... I really think you should make a sequel( dont know how to spell) to this cause it ROCKS! YOU TOO! I am so adding you to my favs...
Cresent95

Just a not 4 da futer: its TARANEE and BLUNK!

now this is cute. Will is made for Caleb! there like that *Crosses fingers*
WARNIG: IF THIS IS CxC THEN I WONT LIKE U ANYMORE.
PLAESE NOTE: IF THIS IS A WxC THEN U WILL GET A COOKIE!

IT WAS WONDERFUL!
good job!

Cute. I added this to my C2. The one thing I would have liked to see is more fluff development, not just a breakup and timejump wedding with little relationship development inbetween. And the chapters were a bit short, but the story was long enough.

Great job, though. =)