Awsome job! I wrote a bigger review, but something messed up and I'm not sure it was submitted o_O;

I liked that fanfic a lot! You write really well and it's not too angst. great oneshot!

But it would be great if it would become more than a oneshot, ne? ;)

~Lunael

Aww. Nice. Iruka is an...interesting character, and yu captured him well.

A very nice piece. Gave me a sort of warm feeling inside. Loved the ending too, how there's still hope in Iruka's world. ^^

-MeeLee