iwas thinking it'd be a bit more of a strip tease but me just a perv

i still liked it

hehe

it's just from the title that i thought that

don't even know what mobius strip is till i read it

but oh well stil good

Gosh, your writing style almost feels poetic. It was so mesmorizing, I loved how you combined a little of the show with a little expanding of it.

Great stuff.

I liked it...it was simple, yet elegant. That's what I thought when I finished the fic. ;; Great job! )

Very well-written and beautiful. I love it! I don't think it needed an M rating, though. I guess it's better to be safe than sorry!:)

That was beautiful. You are a wonderful author.

Bravo! I love it! Gorgeus!

I like this. Yay for Haku and Zabuza! I like the way this is explained. Really, I've always kind of seen it like this. 0 Yeah...

Anyway, this is just as beautiful as everything else you write, and I adore it absolutely to death.

Have a happy (belated) new year

BHS