 twilightrose29@yahoo.com 2009-11-18 . chapter 5 OMG...you have to continue, i'm on pins and needles...will Atemu be alright? |
 Grock-gro-Alacht 2009-06-03 . chapter 1 I guess it's not bad if yer a hopeless fan of yugimon |
 anon 2009-06-03 . chapter 1 what else can i say about this 'cept yes. |
 kimberly brown 2009-06-02 . chapter 5 you must continue to right this story for i am now very very interested in it and want to know what happens next. i want to be as talented as you are for writing stories like this because i want to be an animation artist within this year or next year! |
 kimberly 2009-06-02 . chapter 1 i love it i just wish that it was on tv as an animated series though! |
 Angel Fantasy 2009-04-23 . chapter 5I bet Seto is going to join the party. I don,t know why, but I feel it in my bones. Good job at starting the suspense, it promises to get really interesting. I hope you'll update your next chapter soon... even if it's been 3 years without one. If ever you need any help in plotting your story, you can always ask me for help, or any other author on this site.
Your Yu-Gi-Oh manga on , called "duelists of the darkness" really cool, especially the images, so I hope you'll publish the pages too.
I'll be waiting! Don't give up on this story; it has potential! ^^ |
 Angel Fantasy 2009-04-23 . chapter 4... The laydy didn,t have to gag him to take him to a new place; she could just have sent him to sleep wiht one of her pells or knocked him out. I hope joey and honda will be there, too. |
 Angel Fantasy 2009-04-23 . chapter 3Poor Pharaoh... But there's one thing that intriguates me. Why didn't the Egyptian Gods come and help him, since he was in their realms?
Anyway, that's a good chapter. It's getting interesting. |
 a 'slifer the sky dragon' fan 2009-02-26 . chapter 2 carrying on screaming. i also adore that you put violence in it. you've got taste, and you know how to make people smile. :) on the behalf of the fans out there, please update the rest of the story because you are incredible. *hugs the computer. and i saw your drawings. you are one of a kind. i wish i could like that. okay i'm ranting on. keep the good work up. DEMON ATEMU WOAHH! sorry. |
 A 'SLIFER THE SKY DRAGON' FAN. 2009-02-26 . chapter 1 *jaw drops. this is a great chapter. you are amazing. i love it because it carries on from when yu-gi-oh ends. proving that yami/atem and yugi have not finished their story yet. :) |
 :) 2009-02-26 . chapter 1 WOW BEAUTIFUL. |
 yugiohvamp 2009-02-15 . chapter 5Ilovethis story ^_^ areyougoingto updatesoon? |
 Sunrise Phoenix 2008-12-30 . chapter 5This is good, but do you think you could make a beauty and the beast with demon Atemu? I mean it's perfect. But anyway, great job; keep going. |
 surfergirl19 2008-12-07 . chapter 2Good chapter.I only find a few yugioh fanfics,where they describe the ancient egyptian mummification process.You sure did your homework.:) |
 Pharaohyamifan 2007-12-03 . chapter 5Great story! saw your pics on Devine(?) art, and they're great too! Are you continuing with this story, 'cause that would be great! I'd love to find out what happens to Atemu. If you're not, can you tell me what the ending was going to be? I hate it when a story is left unfinished! |