Very good story. I like how you use English without hardly any errors at all, just a couple of typos. Most authors never pay attention to grammar or spelling. I like the way Dawn and Ian fit in with SG-1. I especially liked Dawn's take on 'absence makes the heart grow fonder.' I'm retired military and I think she's right ... for the first few times the reunion is great, but after too many times people just get bitter and love wanes. Thanks for a very enjoyable read.

I have just spent the last two days reading all of the Ian Dawn chronicles and I have just on thing to say.

I bow down before you.

I love this fic. Could you please tell me which one is the first in the series?

Okay what happened to Samantha. Did Riley got a divorce or widowed and married a Slayer?

A good start. I like the long chapters, they fit well.

love it