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| giveGodtheglory 2006-01-04 ch 1,  | abuseThe perminant child is a theme I use in many of my stories as well. This was well-worked, but I found one spelling mistake. skull. Other than that, it draws the reader in and raises questions which makes one want to read more. God bless! |