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| GW 2007-04-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseSo...you are going to finish this, right? Because I really, really want to know what'll happen. |
| Jammeke 2007-03-21 ch 3, | abuseOh my God, please review! I'm dying to read more!! |
| Amanda 2006-10-30 ch 3, anon. | abuseOh please Oh please write more! I am eager to find out about John! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! More please! More PLEASE! MORE please! More please! |
| Splitbeak 2006-07-05 ch 3, | abuseThis is good. You are going to finish it, right? |
| MandyK 2006-05-01 ch 3, | abuseOh, I wish you'd update this story, I keep checking, please? |
| RecycledFunk 2006-04-26 ch 3, | abuseOh! You can't end it there! Please finish! |
| Alipeeps 2006-04-11 ch 3, | abuseWow. This was really good,. Great characterisation and an intersting plotline - I hope you're going to continue with this story? |
| Deb1 2006-03-30 ch 3, | abuseVery well written. I think your depiction of the characters are right on target. I like the idea of Shepherd and Koyla having to come to terms with relying on each other. Good job. I look forward to the next installment. |
| Aunt-Slappy 2006-01-28 ch 3, | abuseExcellent start! When can we expect more? |
| Ginger 2006-01-22 ch 3, | abuseThis is a great story! Please post more soon! |
| kas7 2006-01-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseplease carry on, this is very interesting. I really want to know what will happen |
| rogue1503 2006-01-19 ch 3, | abuseCool Story! - looking forward to your updates! |
| Vecturist 2006-01-19 ch 3, | abuseWow. Great descriptions of everything. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Delka 2006-01-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseInteresting. Can't wait to see where it goes. |
| Kitty 2006-01-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseI should have seen that coming, after all your story summary did warn us that John would have to work with Koyla to survive, but it was still as much a shock to me as to him when he turned that unconscious body over! And a very nicely observed reaction from Rodney who naturally feels he's let John down. At first he's appalled at Ronan's barbarism, until he rationalises just what sort of people the Genii are, and that he may well have lost his best friend through their actions! My one and only gripe...can you post quicker? Please! |