I really liked reading this! It was soooo good! I never really thought much about Dave, until i started watching the whole series over again, and i kind of fell in love with him and Lane. Your writing style is awesome! I think you wrote the characters very well.

aw, i am in love with Lane/Dave pairing. this one was great. i wish there was more long ones though. good job ]

aw...yay!

i love Lane/Dave. well, no, i don't LOVE them, the way i do Rory/Dean or Lorelai/Luke, but they're definitely my third favorite couple.

i'm so mad at the O.C. for taking my beloved Dave Rygalski away. i refuse to watch it. and as much as i love Gil/Sebastian Bach, the band is missing something without Dave. oh, i know: the O.C. should be cancelled, because it's awful anyways, and they should bring Dave/Adam Brody back and get rid of Zack/Todd Lowe, because he's an ugly-haired whine who is not at all good looking. plus he's kind of stupid.

ANYWAYS...you don't actually *want* to hear my incredibly long rants about what *I* would change if I were ASP.

so, anyways, great story.

cute!

you captured lane well ]