Nice

I luvs it!

short but sweet (most of my stories are short)

this was really cute and awesome and... well yeah, i guess i'm getting carried away. by the way i hope you make a sequal to "something about you".

I think that you mean "must"-

there are a thousand things that most be done

by the way, I loved it!

simply captivating. *adds to favorites* :) i loved it very much

heya Lilya-chan ,

haven't read ff's in a while and am not a big fan of the RenjixTatsuki pairing , but I do like this fic and "something about you"(maybe I should review that one too "),

hope you go one writing ,

xx , Sam

Did I like it?...or, did I hate it? *-)..

nah...

I LOVED IT !

Lilya, really a nice one Me is now of, to read more stories!

*huggles*

Neko-chan

Good stuff! By the way, why does Tatsuki and Renji's love be a secret? I've read a lot of them on the same lines...maybe the next one you write will be them able to share their feelings with the rest. Neways, Well written!

Non so se te l'avevo già detto quando me l'hai mandata, in ogni caso te lo ripeto un'altra volta: veramente bellissima (come al solito, ovviamente). I tuoi lavori son sempre fantastici, complimenti, e il tuo stile è ottimo *me molto invidiosa!* hehehe... XD

Ma anche questo ti sarà già stato detto miliardi di volte, non vero? ;P

Ancora complimenti...

Ale *aka* funny-neko

oh definitely liked that one :D

The constant contrast between night and day being reflected in their relationship is very nicely done. Renji's sense of obligation also comes across proficiently and gives his character depth.

Grammar wise it was polished. The only thing I wasn't sure about was the use of "nothing can be procrastinated." Procrastination is a verb that expresses something one does, rather than something that is being done to someone or something. It's like you can say 'he procrastinated on his assignment', but not 'his homework was procrastinated'. I could be wrong, but may I suggest, "nothing can be wasted on procrastination"?

Well, while I liked it, I don't understand the general theme... Why do a lot of Rentsuki (Renji/Tatsuki) fans use the "their love is not allowed" idea? Because there's not a difference between that and Ichiruki, besides for the fact they've enever met, is there? Hum... Excellent work, by the way. _

It is darn kick butt! I love it! _

Your writing is beyond description - and I mean that in a good way. Your work is flawless, and the story is worth reading again a few times over. Looking forward to more of your writing later -

-Heron