She's so straight-forward, isn't she? The cuteness! -hugs- ;P

At the start, it says his head hurt "real badly." I'm pretty sure that's slang so I would change it to "really badly." Yes I am a grammar freak, my apologies. That said, it's really cute and warm, and I liked the very last line, cause we all know the story only really started here!

I'm rambling. Nice story.

LastCetra

Oh this got me hanging on the cliff! Please continue! I can't wait to find out what happens! Pretty please! Aeris is a great character, so is cloud.

wow! please please continue! i wanna know more!...pls

That was funny. And you should to a fanfiction where Areis and Cloud get married, that would be alsome!

That was quite good. Perhaps it would be a better idea to write selected parts from the game's story (made up or not), instead of trying to novelize the whole thing?

Aww that was cute! Good job! XD!

I think the title is cute too! ^_^