this was a great story, i cant wait to see what happens in the sequel

please please tell me you have some sort of art depicting the glaring constest between snape and slytherin...that would be so awesome!

I'm very sorry for all of your troubles. But I really love your writing, and am headed off to read more or your stuff!
XOXOXOXOXO,
Fern

Wow. Great story! I already read the first one! Keep up the great work. I hope things are going well for you I know its been a while since you finished this but i want to tell you i am so sorry to hear the bad news. *hugs*

-Kristen-

As good as the first. Snape's last line was really cheesy though. It's time to read the next part!

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BUNNY

Daddy Snape I never tire of you. <3

Nearly had a heart attack during the segment of Snape's dream D:

Oh. This chapter cleared everything up. Excuse my previous email! Sorry for the trouble!

Maybe I had a misconception...But I thought Fudge wasn't the minister anymore? I mean his support base was captured and sentenced to Azkaban right? Malfoy especially? I thought you referred to Amelia Bones as Minister Bones in one of the chapters...Am I mistaken? I'm kinda perplexed right now.

Had a wonderful time reading this ! Thanks :]

generally a very lovely story - a few small errors/typos here and there, and this one just amused me so much that I thought I'd best tell you about it... It's very cute, but since when does Shaun have feathers? :-D

"Shaun squealed with delight, reaching up to first hug and then stroke the bird, his small feathers combing and preening her feathers almost as well as her cruelly hooked beak would be able to. “Niveus, I missed you. Are you here to stay now?” In his excitement, Shaun’s word tumbled out of his mouth."

um, is Growing up Snape done?
cause i just started the 3rd in the series and its like some chapters are missing, i was wondering if that would be explained in flashbacks later or if you were writing both stories at the same time. Please answer my questions so that i may continue reading the series, Thank You
Ja ne ^-^

I enjoyed this one too.

I find myself a little disappointed that the Weasleys aren't more prevalent in the story. However, the reason they were not included in the school makes absolute and complete sense. I hope Harry/Shaun can still become friends with Ron. And I don't know if Missy is the right witch for Severus or not, but we all need somebody. Just ask Nickelback.

Just another comment, not sure that you really care to correct it, but several times in this chapter you call amelia bones, amanda bones.

aw Fawkes is so cute ^^ okay back to reading had to comment on that