Engrossing.

I think this deserves to be in the Avatar show. :)

story's amazing. really amazing.

Wow. That was amazing. Really, really amazing. How'd you managed to think that far? I'll forever wonder about the mind-boggling abilities of writers like you ;) Thanks so much for sharing!

Very nice.

I like this creation myth despite the grammatical mistakes. It's clever and does its job of explaining how things came to be.

[squeals] wow. this was pretty awesome. the style, the pattern, it was just so good that i had to say something. good title, too.

i remember passing by this fic a lot when browsing the favorites of authors i liked, and i passed by it one last time and thought, hey, why not, and i totally don't regret it. :)

this was almost as awesome as you. have a good one!

KD

Simply beautiful. This piece of art flowed wonderfully and with this, you were able to transport me to the world of Avatar, or rather, the beginnings of it, if that makes any sense whatsoever x]

Amazing tale you've written here. Utterly wonderful.

That was an amazing myth! I loved it.

I don't see the romance aspect of this but it was brilliantly written and creatively rendered. Awesome creation-myth. :D

OMG. This drabble/short story was AMAZING! I freaking loved it. LOL. It was so detailed and well thought out.

Sarah

That... was... brilliant... I actually read it aloud to myself just so I could hear how awesome it was. You are a truly talented writer.

...Awesome. Just... just plain AWESOME.

I don't know why, but that gave me shivers. Wonderful story and a good way to explain the Avatar's creation.