|Reviews for A Proposal and a Promise|
| thisisforyou 2/11/11 . chapter 1
This was cute, and Froderick was nicely in character. I guess it's hard to get Gwyn's spunk into a shot of this nature, but you pulled that off pretty well too.
You had a couple of grammar mistakes ("full-coarse meal" should have been "course" not "coarse") and I'm not sure your use of formal language worked, even though I appreciate what you were trying to do with it.
But I enjoyed it. I sort of always saw her making a life with Froderick when it didn't work with 'Conrad' and this nicely indulged my fantasies. Thanks.
| gwynoflocksley17 7/14/08 . chapter 1
AW. What happened? Is she going to say yes to Froderick? She CAN'T, because she loves Philip!
Please, do something to make readers happy!
| Bleak December 6/14/08 . chapter 1
Yes! I watched the movie recently for the first time, and all I could think about was how...wrong...it felt for Gwyn and Phillip to be in love. Maybe a crush, that's understandable, but not lasting love. Froderick is so much more believable and realistic. Nicely written!
| annonomous 8/14/07 . chapter 1
wow. that was great. I didnt know anyone else wanted Gwyn and Froderick to be together but me. It was a pleasant suprise to find a story that actualized their love in such a realistic way.
| JainaSkylar 4/23/07 . chapter 1
Aww...that's so sweet. I think that Froderick and Gwen belong together.
*Awards cybercookie* Very good job!
| aspirer 9/18/06 . chapter 1
aww :) they're adorable
| Monica Ronovitch 1/5/06 . chapter 1
Wow. I am amazed- no one has even bothered to review this yet? How could they dare to be so lazy?
This is extremely well written. Good plot, descriptive details, grammar, flowing conversation, nothing for me to criticize. I usually offer constructive criticism, but I've got nothing to criticize.
Would you consider continuing the story? It's really good... I like what you have written (unless, of course, the rest is covered by the movie- I have to watch it again, I haven't seen it in a while)...