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| Tony the jew 2007-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseGreat story. Sad when you think about Rommie ,and what she goes is how she feels. |
| A Moment In Subtext 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseYou know, you capture this side of Rommie really well, I await (hopefully) more fics like this one. I especially liked the line about them being her crew first, its very well phrased. |
| Tate Icasa 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuse*blinks once* *blinks twice* *wipes tear from eye* |
| dawn2dusk 2006-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery interesting perspective. I like how you give a Romie point of view of her relationships with each charactor. The philosophicalness (not a word I know) of the last couple fo charactors is great. |
| phoenix's shadow 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abusethat was so good! so good hehe!! |
| Rommie's Voice 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abusewow that was great. I think you did a great job of exploring Rommie's feelings. |
| squid109 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseVery nice look into Rommie's mind and the tug of war between duty and friendship that is inherent in militarty life. Dylan's and Rhade's nad probably Trance's perspective would undoubtably be much like Rommie's but it would be interesting if you wrote up Harper, Beka and feelings. |
| Troll99 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abusePerfect! You're one of the few writers who (IMHO) really understand Rommie. It remindid me a little of your "My Name Is" - and that's meant as a compliment, attesting that your "understanding" of the character is really good. I tried to find different descriptions of her way of thinking in both stories but failed. Great job! |
| Benesound 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abusePoor Rommie. Good story. |
| fuzzytomato 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. You write well and its great to get a glimpse into the mind of Rommie. |