Reviews for The True Confessions of Ayanami Rei

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Fanf1cFan 2008-09-24 ch 2,	abuseI like the departure you have taken from the series. Rei's internal dialogue/narration help make the character believable, explaining how her experiences shaped her behavior, the way she appeared in the series. It is also interesting that you reveal Rei's awareness of Yui's presence in Unit 01. Some explanation in your story, as to why and how that came about, might have been helpful. A small criticism on the logic/reasoning around how Shinji ended up in the capsule . . I would expect, imagining realistic behavior, that Commander Ikari would have had Ritsuko up in his office explaining her actions, unless he had ordered them, but you didn't say so in your story. There are also some grammar errors and typos here and there. I assume you are aware of them but just haven't corrected them. Anyway, this is interesting enough that I will continue to read it. You're doing good. Keep it up.
Kukki-Kun 2008-08-13 ch 21,	abuseI found this website by accident and your story was the link that took me here and I'm so glad it did cos i love this story its amazing i love it its my most favorite fanfiction I've ever read i can't wait for the next chapter and i looked at the tip at the bottom of the page and all i have to say to critique is just keep an eye out for spelling thats all i can't wait for the next chapter keep it up ^^ ~Kukki-kun
Tail Kinker 2008-06-15 ch 2,	abuseLooking more promising. I see that you are not adhering strictly to the original story line.
Tail Kinker 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuseInteresting start, I'm looking forward to the series proper.
clumsyxjinkx 2008-05-06 ch 21, anon.	abuseOmg I luv this story!please please please make sure u continue it. After watching the whole 26 episode I was left dazed and sad. I would have liked a lil more romance in the anime but this is even better. And the chapters are so long and good. U r a great writer!btw I'm srry bout your dog around that time I also lost my cat murphy it was devastating!!the worst part was I was out of the country, and so one day my stupid stepdad left a door open and he got out.anyway can't wait for next chapter!
Alucard180 2008-04-15 ch 21,	abusegood chapter not much to say , no mistakes, and is as good always update soon
94saturn 2008-04-13 ch 21,	abuseThe o’ll, “MAKE ME BREAKFAST” was a little cliché but interesting from Rei’s point of view and you actually had Asuka toned down to a more realistic level. Rei helping Shinji prepare breakfast was a tender moment; I like the way they are growing together. The way Rei acquiesced to tasting scrambled eggs was well done too and should keep the ‘veggie police’ off of your case. I also like the way Misato is being a positive influence. A lot of authors paint her as being just as bad, as the rest of NERV and that is just not her character. She does her job but she has compassion. The interlude between Shinji and Rei in the entry plug was semi-sweet chocolate icing! The fudge of WAFF, they are on a collision course to be together and I have the patients to wait it out. Also, Rei is realizing that eventually she will have to be honest with Shinji about the secrets she holds. Soon enough, Shinji will have to be honest with her, as well. Then they can cement a lasting relationship regardless of what commander butt wipe wants. (If you want innovative ways to make Gendo worm food just ask.) Don’t agonize over the spelling of characters names. The spelling for Kaworu that I had was, Kaoru, before I did the research and Touji is a legitimate spelling. I don’t know what it is derived from but I have seen ‘big guns’ use it. I picked one and stuck to it, to be consistent. This story is one of my all time favorites….I joined FF so that I could leave you a review and then started posting stories. I want to thank you my Lady Sesshy. Keep this one going to the conclusion! Lord Saturn.
mangafreak7793 2008-04-12 ch 21,	abusepretty great chapter
TJG 2008-04-12 ch 21, anon.	abuseLooks interesting. I have to admit that initially looking at the title and summary, I just thought it was going to be some long emo soliloquy and just passed by the story. I have added it to my favorite links now.
Riko Ozaki 2008-02-07 ch 17,	abuseKonnichiwa Sesshy-chan In the first half of the chapter, you have brought Rei back to a more mainstream and canon thought process and speech pattern. Her interaction with Shinji and thoughts about him were believable and heart-warming. I felt as though you ignored Reika, though. In the second half, you handled the interaction between all the children well, it was like I could see them there in front of me. You are a very twisted person, playing with us this way. Did Ritsuko kill her or not? Will the Commander ultimately be handed his own head? I guess only you know. :) Another fine read, and another chapter to burn onto disk. Dômo arigatô gozaimasu. Riko
Alucard180 2008-02-03 ch 20,	abusei have nothing bad to say about this chapter, looking forward to more
Riko Ozaki 2008-02-03 ch 16,	abuseOh, you are too evil... Maybe there is a small piece of Leliel lodged in your brain, somewhere? As well as everything else happening to Reika, you just had to spring a "thirty day serial chemical imbalance" on her, didn't you? I hope you have terrible cramps xp Seriously, this was very good. I hope you do not kill-off your OC. She seems to be a bewitching blend of the Rei in the series, and the one we all wish we could have seen. It is five before Midnight, here, and I think I am just about out of reading time. Keep-up the quality of the verse you have so far produced. I will be reading more when I can. Riko
Riko Ozaki 2008-02-03 ch 15,	abuseHello again, Sesshy-chan Another good chapter! Wonderful tension building between all of the characters. And Reika, a copy of a fake. An odd but wonderful twist in this story. The bonding scene with Shinji was great; it also helped flesh-out Reika for us readers. Gendo seems to be back to himself, except for the little bobble with SEELE. And you have not forgotten about our other friends in the story. That was an excellent way to give Reiko more information. On the down side: Punctuation still needs work. Sometimes it seems like you left out words in your sentences. You should have some type of divider on the page when you change tenses. Of course, these are only my opinions. It is looking like a marathon-night of reading, for me. You have definitely grasped my intrest with your story. Ja ne Ozaki Riko
Riko Ozaki 2008-02-03 ch 14,	abuseKonbanwa Sesshy-chan, It is 21:30 here in Tokyo, and I just finished your story up to Chapter 14. Two of my friends here on FFN recomended that I read your story: 94Saturn and Jintsu. From the beginning, I can see your progression from a scribbler to an aspiring author. Your spelling has improved and your text has become more descriptive. You still jumble tenses, but that will work itself out in time, with practice. I also have the same problems. I tend to use Office 2003 and Rough Draft to work out the problem areas in my text, since I am not a native-speaker of English. So far, the characters seem to be in balance, the only sour note I found seemed to be at the end, with Gendo. I do not believe that he would act the way he did with his underlings pointing guns at him. This is only my perception of him, and not a flame on you. Only my opinion. Your portion at the end of the story and the teaser are a welcome freshness. I have something to look forward to after reading the chapter. I will be reading more of this tonight(maybe I can skip my morning classes?). Thank you for an entertaining read,darkeangel00 Ozaki Riko
94saturn 2008-02-02 ch 20,	abuseOnce again Lady Sesshy pulls off a great chapter! I like the dynamic between Kensuke and Hikari. It might just be their mutual concern for Reika but they seem to have become good friends. Hikari trusts him enough to sleep in the same room without fear of him becoming a pervert. Mina is absolutely adorable, you capture the innocence of a child expertly. Hehe, I can’t help but wonder why sweet innocent Reika would need birth control pills, Lord Saturn has perverted thoughts involving a Kensuke, Reika pairing. And her ‘attitude attack’ at taking five medications was humorous. Your tasteful shower scene with Rei will have the boys drooling (grin). The mighty Gendo Ikari reduced to begging for nooki, PRICELESS! It is so unfair that Misato interrupted what I just know was going to be a tender embrace and maybe even a kiss. Rei in Shinji’s apartment building? The possibilities are endless! Well done my Lady. Lord Saturn.

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