its really beautiful,and although i never read odyssey-i PLAN to!-i could understand everything to perfection..it was very sad,but so beautiful!well done!

That was so beautiful.
The ending really was moving; the sadness is just so palpable.
I really enjoy your writing style. Its very realistic.
This was great! I shall look forward to reading more of your writings!

That's really really sad. I liked the personalities of trhe nymphs and the way that you wrote about two minor charactors as I think in fanfiction that can work better as the reader doesn't have such a clear vision of them in their minds.

simply beautiful. ciao!!

~Aquamarine Kitten