This is excellent.

I like the writing style, and I think it's great that you give more credit to Luffy than most people give.

Hi I wanted to say that I think your One Piece stories are AMAZING! The character's seem to be all in character and as I read I feel like I'm actually in the minds of the characters or even seeing the story like it's an actual episode.

You also do a great job with Luffy's characterization. So many people have a hard time capturing Luffy but you do a really good job at it. Luffy being so simple has possibly the most complicated personality of anyone in the series after all.

So yes I applaud your work and I have indeed read it all. You're one of my favorite author's on this site.

^_^ I like this little one shot. Luffy does remind me of Yoh a lot now that you mention it. ^^ (that'd be an interesting crossover ^^') But anyway, this is just how Luffy acts. I'm especialy reminded of when Nokijo(sp?) was going to tell the crew about Nami and Luffy just walked off saying he didn't care. ^_^ If only we had some more people like Luffy here, the world would be a better place. ^^ Anywho, very nice fic. *bows* I'm glad I've gotten the oprotunity to read this and I thank you for writing it. ^^ Hopefully your muse will come back because writing's no fun if you don't have much insparation. I think I'll go check out that co-op story of yours now. Fair sailing to ye.

I really liked it! =D It's so... Luffy! =.="

Aw, that was so sweet and so very Luffy. The fic portrays his mindset perfectly, how he sees everything simply because there's really no need to complicate things.

Wonderful job. ^^

~*Digitaldreamer*~

I love the way you portray Luffy. This story makes me want to be like him even more than before...
You rock. =3