You have a new fan of your writing. Fox likes lots.

haha cant wait til all these coem out and dont Forget Queen Zelda! :D

Sora (Yes i play [pretty much every game under the sun and moon for that matter...)

YOUR EVIL -sticks stiker on Xiao's forhead that says 'EVIL' in big bold letters- HOW COULD U FORGET MY FAVORITE PART? -starts fake crying like an idiot- U FORGOT THE 'One who knows nothing can understand nothing' WHEN THE WHOLE WORLD GOES WHITE HHOW COULD YOU? ok enough of that anyways its true THEY ARE LOOKING UP AT HIM! yeah he is that tall i guess to have Goofy looking up at him Goofys freaking six foot taller than that oh oh and Ansem )Acid A sam) is standing on an upward slop also makeing him taller! that might have done something PLUS he starts to hover/fly... its "the heart may be weak, and sometimes may even give IN" see that IN not UP just pointing that out :) YEah i no that sucks dont it (how ansem cant seem to die) the first time i EVER beat the game or even sow it get beaten EVER i tried to beat ansem um lets see now i kept track of this oh here it is 63 times whoa hehe didnt no it was that many tehe well anyways i didnt no that ansme lived on and on ad on sso i got so fudgeing ** when he lived after that time but i must say it was the hardest (the second time in the arens i mean) but now its so easy its not funny... i can beat him in about a minute maybe less now! funny eh? and i think my story will be up tomorrow or even later tonight! and he talks to the DOOR so desspratly its funny i laugh every time and then get freaked out about his freakish YELLOW eyes NO not amber YELLOW ORANGE EYES ew so freaky... and when Sora says that have you noticed how he leans forward HOPEING that hes right aint that funny to? i always point that out and then friends tell me to shut up :D I would have NEVER listened to Donald and Goofy at that point in time (the now sora together micky part!) dude who listens to a black blob with bright light flying from behind him SHOWING OFF his Keyblade like ggeze oh and with a high pitched scary sqeaky voice? WHO? haha Kairi does this really retarded eye thing right there JUST before the grphics get good her eyes like roll its scary O.O oh and Sora dosnt appear its sorta like a memory type thing that her mind creates its sort of complicated... U DIDNT ADD THE 'Speacal Secret Another side... Another story" HOW COULD YOU? then again... u might not have gotten it... oh well ill just watch it countless times! Good though I was laughing but last tiem after i typed all the hehehes my rists hurt sso yeah.

Sora

Sora grinned at them, "Because, If we we're lost we would't have the slighted idea of where we are, but we know that we're here, see, so we can't be lost, then can we", he finished that is EXACTLY the sort of thing i would say! and i wanna no how u did those circle thingys! HOW? HOW? ok anyways -starts to read again- hehehehehehehehehehhehhehehehehehehheehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe -starts to read again- realy YAY YAY YAY WHOOPIE YES NOW I GET TO READ SOME MORE ASTUFF THAT REALLY LIGHTENS UP MAH DAY! next chappter will be up in id say a week! yes i no im a lazy lil bugger but hey!

Sora

Why didn't I find this fic before... its flippin' funny as hell... Well done with it all *Merlin appears randomly and then disappears after muttering about unicycle riding shadow heartless...*

Well fantastic and for the love of cheesecake update!

See You On The Flip Side

Dav Strife

Hey!! i liked this chapter to Oh and i did hook up my PS2 to my computer but my sister stole it again -_- -sigh- cant win and Did u no that when Sora unlocked his and Kairis haert (with the all mighty evil Keything that isnt even worthy of a name) 2 new things were created or somthing like that Namine who is Kairis shadow and Roxas (bhk) who is Soras shadow or somthing like that i dont have complete details so bear with me! anyways... OH OH and did u no that (sry if i dont spell this right) that Male or howerer u spell it means EVIL so like Mally (Mallifecent) is really genuilly evil! isnt that cool?? and i dont like ansme thats why when i was playing on my computer and went to beat A sam (ansem) cause i felt like it i recorded it YES I RECORDED IT SO I COULD WATCH IM DIE OVER AND OVER SO I WOULDNT HAVE TO ACCTUALLY DO IT OVER AND OVER HAHAHAHAHAHA ok... MY FRIEND HAS JUST INFORMED ME THAT A SAM (acid ansem) IS DIZ! and he WAS a recepected sage and King of the radiant gardian he belived that darkness could spread through hearts no matter how pure the heart so he reasurched darkness so he could bolster the defence against darkness threating his world Hollow Bastion (at which point i remarked HES PHYCO!!)he used in human experaments to discover knoladge by useing his own lab assitent its like half past midnight so tired oh shes telling me more... never mind no shes not... ok... well im probably gonna say all this again at the begging or ending of my fic whatever isnt it werid though Diz is one of the organizeation! anyways good chapter and im still gonna murder u donald for TRYING TO KILL ME AFTER I CAME BACK LIKE I CRAWLED THROUGH ALL THOSE DANMED HEARTLESS JUST TO GET BACK TO U GUYS AND WHAT DO U DO? 'Kairi ill protect u' or something like that about to smash me! ggr makes me so mad! Donald ur an idiot let me make that loud and clear ok? IDIOT! good thing Kairi could sence it was me though other wise i woulda ripped u to freaking shreds! HAHA and its all donalds fault for throwing that stinking football in that danmed keyhole! if u hadnt done that donald THEN THERE WOULDNT BE EVEN BIGGER STRONGER HEARTLESS DONT U NO THAT FOOTBALL PLAYERS ARE USALLY STRONG SO THAT FOOTBALL MADE THE HEARTLESS STRONGER gr OMG my two wait no THREE fav Keys in the WHOLE GAME EVA are Oathkeeper Oblivion and Ultima they all get the job done! POOR MEEKO POOR MEEKO? HULLO IM THE ONE TYPEING OUT THE WHOLE GAME PLUS ALOT MORE POOR MEEKO U SAY GAH! AND I HAVE TO KICK LIL SIS OFF THE PS2 WRITE DOWN ALL THE PARTS CAUSE I CANT PAUSE AND STUFF CAUSE LIL SIS WANTS IT BACK THEN I HAVE TO TRY AND MEMORIZE WHAT EVERY PLACE LOOKED LIKE AND THEN TYPE IT AL OUT gr gr gr gr ok im ok nowhey look friend gave me more info 'the youngest and newst member of the orginization. Roxas, the "Discovered Key", was "born" when sora briefly became a heartless. Roxas (whos name is an anagram on Sora's name with an 'X' added) was a special Nobody who fought with the Keyblade and the power of light.' hes soras 'shadow' isnt that cool? he ripped the steering wheel off hahahahahahaha hehe it dont make sence but its funny! um... whats a Beenamoth? o u mean the Behemoth right? big purplpe dinosaur -suddenly starts laughing- sorry sorry over tired ok sorry NOT Barney hehe '"You have to go kill Ansem", said Aurora' but ansems really Diz LETS GO KILL DIZ HAHA im sorry... and i think its kind of gay that they called it 'end of the world' it shoulda been 'end of all worlds' or 'end of worlds' something like that not 'end of the world' that sounds more like it should be on the edge of a world where u fall off or something... '"Once the worlds are restored, they'll be separate again. Everyone will go back to where they came from", Leon said. sadly' NOT DANMED TRUE Sora runs off meets Namine who slowly gets rid of his memorys then once hes in egg flower thing replaces all his memorys of Kairi with herself even though shes Kairis shadow shes still a person pretty much! and then Kairi Roxas(BHK) Riku and KIng Mickey all go in search of Sora who has mysteriously dissappeared! '"Sora, not that you care what I think or feel when your driving...but the End of the world is at the other end othe the Universe"' U GOT THAT FROM um... whats it called oh yeah THE HITCH HICKERS GUIDE TO THE GALAXY! i have the book and have watched the movie ITS DA BEST! i like how u nicly fitted it in there! Oh and are you gonna go into KHCOM? (Kingdom HEarts Chain Of Memorys) just wondering so i no how soon its gonna end or not! mines gonna go right on through everything! yay -suddenly goes sarcastic- yipe i get to write every little detail bout everything -sigh- oh well i got myself into this and am gonna get myself outta this! HAHA anyways good chapter and hope you learned something (I WILL GET U DONALD hehehe MAKE SURE DONALDS WITH U WHEN U READ NEXT CHAPTER when it comes out -cough- ill get to that...) hehehehe :P -evil grin- :D

Sora!

HEy that was good! and uh... Ur comeing up to the sadest part in the whole freaking game! i almost cried at that part... Have you guys ever acctually beaten the game before? or is this ur first time? i think u have but who am i to talk? DONALD I HATED WHEN U LEFT ME OUT THERE ALL ALONE U WERE A STUPID -BEP- AND I SWARE IM GONNA MURDER U FOR WHAT U DID! HAHA -turns back on the 'tv' on computer and makes heqartless kill donald (i have my ps2 hooked up to my computer u see) HAHA TAKE THAT LOSER HEHE my next chapter is on the way just to let you no!

aaw poor Goofy... Hey why does Sora always chose Donald over Goofy when he dosent like DOnald?!? i just dont get it... whatever I liked this chapter! Sister isnt around! YEAH by the way im a girl... Just so u dont have to do annoying slashy thing! anyways i got to go and see if i can kick my mom off the internet (after i eveiw of course)! alrighty! buhbi for now

Tigger: T I DOUBLE GU ER

Me: ANDI STOP MESSING AROUND!

Tigger: But im Tigger! (bounces around)

ME: no ur andi in a tiger suit...

Tigger: Danm... (walks off)

Oklil sis in Tigger costume is...

Pooh Bear: Why Hello Im Poo

Me: No ur andi in a pooh bear costume

Pooh bear: Am not im POO

Me: Then go where u belong IN THE TOILETTE

Pooh Bear: Danm u... (walks off again)

Why does my sister have to have so many danmed costumes ill have to burn them...

Elephant: Hello!

Me: OH FOR PETES SAKE!

Elephant: my name is uh... not Andi thats for sure.

Me: (shoves andi down the stairs) HAHA oh ** im gonna get in trouble for this... WASNT ME IT WAS POOH! BYE

ALRIGHT THAT ROCKED! Thanks for the reveiw! i very much appreciate it! and oh i have a friend who read ur story but she dont have an account so she couldnt reveiw cause u cant do anomonus reveiws on urs! so im telling you that she loved it cause she was laughing over msn over it! anyways oh crap Jens takeing over -_-...

Jen: HHAHAHAHA I FINALLY FOUND OUT WHAT UR DOING OVER HERE!

Me: Ur supposed to be evil doornob...

Jen: OH RIGHT! -bites me-

Me: Now im typeing through my pain -sigh and hits Jen (acctually lil sis) over head-

Jen: OW NOW U MADE MY HEAD HURT!!

Me: you made my foot hurt -_-

Jen: DDID NOT DAD SHE HURT ME!

Me: Dads not hyere idiot

Jen: aaw

Me: HAHA

Jen: SHUT UP -bites again-

Me: WHY U LITTLE! -wakes her on head with precious manga- AAH MY MANGA NOW LOOK WHAT UIVE MADE ME DO!

Jen: I DIDNT MAKE U DO THAT U DID!

Me: BUT YOU BIT ME LEADING TO THAT!

Jen: DID NNIOT

Me: Fine then im calling u chiken!

Chiken: NO *bep*

Me: -gasps- u swore chiken

Jen: U SWARE ALL THE TIME!

Me: Well you shouldnt copy someone just because there cooler than you!

Jen: GGR -walks away-

Me:FINALLY hahahahahahahaha olk i liked ur fic and yes that was a fight with my sister -sigh- happens approcomatly 3 times a day WAHAHAHAHAH why!?!?

Sora

'Donald, whom had mis-herd her reapted, "Flubber?"' i have a friend who does EXACTLY that instead of flouder yes i had a odg named flounder -sigh- he died last year though! and Jazzys not here YAY i have some peice!! haha!! thanks im sorry Donald but um... I fixed you in my game so ur not stupid in my game! AND HOW DARE HE YELL AT ME DANM THAT KING! oh wait hehe im not haha i didnt mean that... WHAT HAPPENED TO MONSTRO? oh well i dont like that place anyways it where Riku abbandoned me and LEFT ME to fight the scarry heartless! i feel in the acid twice the first time! poor goofy (yes im reading and write ing this at the same time) isnt Sora usally the suisidal one? adnjust out od curiosity are you playing the game while your going along? like i said that danmed king DOSNT HE KNOW THAT KEYS DO HAVE wait... do they? YES OF COURSE THEY DO THE SMITH THAT FORGED THEM< HAHA OH!haha Donald is so ugly he -stops because of Donalds glare- I DIDNT MEAN IT I SWARE! '"I left some of my tenticles there", replied Donald' you no what i would say there 'DONALD HOW THE HELL DO YOU LOSE THOSE WHAT ARE YOU A LIZARD SHEDDING OFF ITS TAIL EVERYTIME SOMEONE GRABS IT?' and then would leave him to drown yup! i mean i would give him a potion... IM A READER I GOTTA SAY I LOVE UR FIC! I CANT BELIVE IM THE ONLY REVEIWER SO FAR AARRG ITS NOT FAIR TO YOU! IM gonna force my friends to reveiw HAHA see how THEY LIKE IT HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA cant belvie i just typed all that -coughs- er... anyways i find it funny and mah dad asked what i was laughing about an i replied with' Oh nothing!' quite fun i must say! anyways cant wait til the next chapter! READ MINE -brain washes- HAHAHAHA that shouldve worked that time!

Sora

Haha this is good the Donald lyrics rule Donalds so stupid in battle but ive made him betta! Go me mostly cause ive beaten the game 16 times but that dosnt matter -_-' i have a level 99 Sora OH YA GO ME no clue what level everyone else is at and nether do i care :)
ta ta for now (Tigger)

Jasmine: WAIT!

Me: what?

Jasmine: They should read your story!

Me: um... well uh sure i just redid the first six chapters so...

Jasmine: Yeah! and they get to read about me!!

Me: Koris the main charactor...

Jasmine: So? Im still in it and Koris best friend!!

Me: Oh brother...

Jasmine: DANM STRAIGHT!

Me: -sigh- Do you have to be so hyper when ever your NOT in the story?

Jasmine: Fanfic! jor fan fiction and i no where were going next!

ME: Oh really?

Jasmine i read ur thoughts!

Me: No u played the game

Jasmine: Shut up

Me: Sorry Jazzys my friend no her name is not really Jasmine just ive based the caractor in my dtory on her so yeah... buh bi for now i like ur comody! (cant spell sorry)

Sora