OMG. I loved it, great story. =]

ah...omg that was an awesome story. First lil slugger fic I've read here ^-^ I loved the drama! sheer awesomeness.

so she killed herself? well that is a bit depressing. but congrads on taking about 2 and a half yrs to complete this story :) haha muy bien mi hermana

in ch 4 you had him say he felt dumbness, but i thik you meant numbness.

its good, although im confused whos POV this is.

is she going to get to see li again?
and if so... does he find out about what she did with whats his face? does she tell him that she was pretending it was him the entire time? oh please god update soon!
D:
D:

~BlackCat

Wowzers! O_O
Please update soon! I wonder why I didn't read this sooner...
I really like how you characterized Lil' slugger. I think it's quite accurate! ^_^

Aw... so cute! Not really sad... or angsty. More like... drama. *nods* But i still loves it! Update... as soon as you can!

~360~

wow

I have an idea of what might happen, but it's at a crossroads right now so please post the chappie soon.^_^
P.s, that last chapter was beautiful, I wouldn't have blamed or flamed you for basicly ending the story right there, but come on, getting kinky with Maniwa? That seems very OOC for your OC.

I love your story! this is one of my favorite shows. keep up the good work!

...I hate cussing, please forgive...but...
WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE?!
What are you doing to Li-
(Looks around madly) I-I-I m-mean Lil' Sl-Slugger?! I LOVE his ad Jordan's relationship and now you're RUINING MY MENTAL STATUS!! I HATE...
I HATE...
I HATE...
I HATE MANIWA!
...harumph. An if ya kill Lil' Slugger make him come back and kill ALL people who oppose him and his loved...Like what I did for Boy Bitched Bat...
Speaking of which...
if you're interested in my precious PA fic, know that it is on hold due to losing my new chapters...*sob*...
I HATE MANIWA AND IKARI!
R.H.

PS: 'See you in hell'...
*Sigh* I luff Li-
(Looks around, but misses the bat aiming at her head) I-I-i mean Lil' Sl-Slugger...
*WHACK!*
RH: Ugh...I'll beh back...

An absolutely beautiful story. But I have to question and I'm not flaming you. I don't like to flame. Why did Jordan have sexual relations with Maniwa? How old is she and how old is he? He's got to be at least 22-24 years old. I'm just asking, but anyways, great story.

PLEASE COUNTINUE! I have loved this story ever since the 1st chapter *nods* I have you only my favorite story alert list ^^

o__O OMG! Theres only one more chapter left after this? WOW! lol his was sure a twist and I didnt see that coming xD It was a great chapter tho! I cant wait til the next one! =D