...I hate cussing, please forgive...but...

WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE?

What are you doing to Li-

(Looks around madly) I-I-I m-mean Lil' Sl-Slugger? I LOVE his ad Jordan's relationship and now you're RUINING MY MENTAL STATUS! I HATE...

I HATE...

I HATE...

I HATE MANIWA!

...harumph. An if ya kill Lil' Slugger make him come back and kill ALL people who oppose him and his loved...Like what I did for Boy Bitched Bat...

Speaking of which...

if you're interested in my precious PA fic, know that it is on hold due to losing my new chapters...*sob*...

I HATE MANIWA AND IKARI!

R.H.

PS: 'See you in hell'...

*Sigh* I luff Li-

(Looks around, but misses the bat aiming at her head) I-I-i mean Lil' Sl-Slugger...

*WHACK!*

RH: Ugh...I'll beh back...

An absolutely beautiful story. But I have to question and I'm not flaming you. I don't like to flame. Why did Jordan have sexual relations with Maniwa? How old is she and how old is he? He's got to be at least 22-24 years old. I'm just asking, but anyways, great story.

PLEASE COUNTINUE! I have loved this story ever since the 1st chapter *nods* I have you only my favorite story alert list

o_O OMG! Theres only one more chapter left after this? WOW! lol his was sure a twist and I didnt see that coming xD It was a great chapter tho! I cant wait til the next one! D

Aw THIS IS THE MOST AWESOME STORY IN PA EVER!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

so damn good. a bit [a lot] oocing, but damnit! the way you do it is so fucking awsome.

loved this story.

can't wait to read the next chapters!

I LOVE THIS! so sad though ;_; you are on my top 5 favortie writters on you know _ no kidding I promise! Hope you countinue soon! but take your time! even if its a year i'll wait

WOAH! suprise ending to the chapter.

Great chapter!

wow, this is so good. I kind of looked over it before, but now really reading it...i think it's so good. update when u can ;-)

It's so beautiful I've always loved lil' slugger. Soetimes I read these stories and pretend I'm the main chracter. Hee hee!

Awesome...Man, talk about Boy B*ed Bat...That is a term I use for any good Paranoia Agent fanfic. It came one day and stuck to me, go figure...Anyway, I'm sorry for Jordan, but happy for lil' Slugger...or should it be the other way around?..Well, anyway, I added you to my Favorite Authors list because of this fanfic. I really, truly liked it. Go, Kitkat!

Are you going to continue? Are you? Tell me you are! Make something terrible happen Lil' Slugger goes crazy over her safty! Maybe even go Demon with rage! That'd be good, but whatever you'll do I'll read!

R.H.

i love this story so romantic for some reason though im not aloud to go to the c2 groups its says theres an error or something ... anyway i cant wait for the next chapter!

dev.