could you please add the lemon scene directly to this story? it's actually not against the rules, and the link doesn't work either...

hey do u think u could send me a link for the adult version of this? id rlly liket o read it...and it was good, a few grammatical errors here and there but otherwise thoroughly awesome.

i agree, very well written,
i would also like the link to the rest of the story please.
thanks. R

Wow... this was great, I loved the detail... I would like it a bit more if they were more "in character", but I can't imagine Shikamaru ever getting into it, so I'd suppose you'd have to make them a bit OOC for the sake of the story, ne?

I tried putting in the URL but it didnt work! send me the url in a private message please because i really wanna read it!
this was really good and AWESOME and it was really well written too :)

WA!
I can't get to da shmex scene! Da linky wont work! And yes, I took out da spaces... Cna joo send meh a link?

It felt like a spa in here! :D I loved it. But hey, hey, hey, where'd the lemon go? *cries* HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!?!!? If you can't post it or something, send me it :O I'm begging you like a a hobo for a quarter. *puppy eyes*

Oh...

Me like. Me like a LOT. That was hot. llal. I read teh lemon and I was like om-triple-SQE! The lemon was interesting, too! Which is weird cause most lemons are all the same and yours had teh same basic stuff but it was different. And its weird giving someone compliments on writing about two guys haveing sex. And it's weirder cause I'd NEVER be able to say it out loud without my face exploding. llal.

Oh yeah! I read your InuHo(hahaha Hojos a ho. hahah. ima dork). It was cute! Never read one b4 but I might now! And yeah! Why ain't there more luving for teh Brothaz Inu? They are the defination of sex-gasm! Like 4 real! ><

lol Anyjoo. That was awesome. Write more or else.

wow...I don't know how many times I've read this, but what's suprising is that I haven't REVIEWED for this. well, here goes...Holy crap! that was awesome! My brain has melted into a smutty pile of smutless..ness...

Here is my review - or my love (whatever you prefer to call it)!
That was one of THEE hottest fanfics i've ever read - and i've read some pretty hot ones XD
X Em

woot! i loved it! and i did go to the other site so i could read it all but i had to look up the story cause it wouldn't take me directly to it. still it was well worth the work, and congrats on one of the best nejiXshika fics i have read.

It is a good story, but your translations are slightly off. Kuso means **. Chikuso is not spelled correctly, nor is the meaning correct. It just means damn, not damn it all to hell. And the correct spelling is chikushou.

.:SulphurWolf:.

Wo! Keep writing ShikaNeji, 'kay? Then again, Neji paired with ANYBODY is hot. ...except Lee. *SHUDDER*

i can't find the censored part of the story

can you please e-amil it to me?

OMG *_* i love you...