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Feifei
2006-11-07 . chapter 3
Awesome! I can't wait for you to update this one too >.
Lilka
2006-04-14 . chapter 3
May b boring bt it was great!Keep it up!N Wen will Hao noe of da gurl,Leena i mean??N wen does romance between Hao n da OC??I wanna read nxt chapter!so PLZ UPDATE SOON!PEACE N STAY HAPPY!
Fuyu Yuki-chan
2006-03-15 . chapter 1
nice storyline. do continue writing this story for i am waiting to know how the story will come out. do let me know when the next chapter comes.!! :)

miyaojosama
Namiko Shigemoto
2006-02-09 . chapter 3
Ha! Hao...the same as always. Really cold hearted-jerk...well, that was REALLY good. Keep it up! Update! It's really good.
Meister
2006-01-26 . chapter 3
Oh? What's this, what's this? You can't even remember me? Dear, oh, dear...
>Getting better, I suppose...
>Hehehe
AngelofDeath vs. EmmaAi
2006-01-25 . chapter 1
sorry if this review was placed in chapter 1 or rather the prologue! i was reading your story backwards! hehehe! weird!
chapter 3 was great! i'm so excited in the events that'll be taking place when Leena and Hao meet!! by the way, when are you planning that again?
my name? i got it from the bible! hehehe! it really stikes me a lot! to bring death to people! ~snickers evilly~ and i read one story that the author's number was 911 so i ran out of nos so that's what i used!
excited for the next chap!update soon!
Phoe.nyxus
2006-01-24 . chapter 3
Hey :D I am SO glad you updated! this chap was really interesting, with the new girl appearing and all :D pls update soon, I', really surious of what's commin g next :D good luck!

- Sima-chan ^^
kill-me911
2006-01-24 . chapter 3
and i thought i was the only one who likes the name 'angel of death'! i mean, i would give anything just to have that as my real name!
anyways . . .i really like this chappie as well as i liked the previous ones! sorry if i wasn't able to review on chap 2, my computer broke down on me! ~sad~ and i just love the appearance of Leena here! and how Hao said "At least your antics never bore me, little brother," it really sounds so cute on Hao! hehehehe! but i still prefer Horohoro! hehehe!
isa18
2006-01-24 . chapter 3
Really really interesting! New girl, Leena ... O, I sure wanna find out more about her. Very nice chappie ! Update soon please ! Huggies !
Mei Marino
2006-01-24 . chapter 3
Hope to see more chapters! It's very nice! Keep up the good work!
Mei Marino
2006-01-19 . chapter 2
It's great! I like it! Hope you update soon!

I have a question.. this is a haoxoc story right?
Meister
2006-01-19 . chapter 2
Hiya
>Man, that was still short, and boring... IMPROVEMENTS! IMPROVEMENTS!
>You're using adjectives that others may find confusing. Try to loosen up a little.
Meister
2006-01-19 . chapter 1
Hiya.
>Hell, that was short... And boring! I expect improvements in coming chapters, got it?
Lilka
2006-01-18 . chapter 2
Hm...Though dis story is more about their life...It's still a great fic n nthing gonna change dat...unless smething come up...Anyway,love ur fic...Update soon!PEACE!
AngelofDeath vs. EmmaAi
2006-01-18 . chapter 2
great story you've got here! hope you can update soon!
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