oh my what a great story!
new style "NORSE MYTHOLOGY", you surely a great writer!!
i love all of your story and you made me cry because you gave me thought that cagalli died!
you are the best!

Hope you would take the time to read ^_^

At last I have reached the last chapter of this story, I feel both happy and sad. Happy for this story is based on one of my favorite mythologies Norse and one of the best anime I have ever watched, Gundam Seed Destiny. Sad for now I would have to say good bye to another wonderful story, I will never regret the time it took too wait and read this lengthy story but before I do say adieu and whatnot I will be giving my full length review of the entire story, I feel that I owe this story a review since I have been reading it without even giving a simple comment. My review will cover up the CONS and then the PROS.

P.S. This is not flaming, I just wish for you the author to be aware of the several problems that I see in the story and hope to see improvements because I love reading your work and I hope this will help.

CONS: I have read all the fights scenes more than twice and most of them have certain cliche elements which are redundant and some times over repeating, several fights scenes are even similar and have the same direction as the previous. Most of the magic used in the story contain the word "sphere" its not bad but you could create another synonym term to give it a different feel.Still in battle, hope to see improvements in battle descriptions in the story, so that to further personify the difficulties the characters have in the battles they face. This one is my opinion only since I love Norse I was kinda disappointed not to see or hear any of the Valkyries of Odin T_T.

PROS: Character pairings ^_^, I just love reading the love pairings you make, its really gives a new color for the story, through your pairings readers are able to see the characters more than just Norse gods or goddesses or even just characters of Gundam Seed Destiny but a whole new character that shares a deeper meaning and purpose, which is almost lifelike. When I read the love pairings in your story I was taken away at the colorful feeling they bring to the story. Some pairing I like in your story is Flay and Rey which was unlikely,Cagalli and Athrun are a serious capable (heavy romance),1 Stellar and Shinn and Lacus and Kira (it becomes funny when Meer butts in ^^). The story is not exactly unique but you have blended all the elements of Norse Mythology in such finesse together with the Gundam Seed Destiny characters that I felt in some way reading a whole new story. Finally the story is well rounded and it keeps the readers both interested and entertained (comedic and romantic scenes are nice to read).

After reading your works from time to time I realize you are quite the romantic writer and that romance is something that you can portray so passionately but it is apparent that a great struggle brings out a far more reminiscing romance, I hope you improve your battle scenes and terms used to keep the story always flowing. Aside from all the drawbacks you have made this story through flawlessly and that what ever your short comings you have made an ensured comeback in some other way.

At the light of all that I said I am ready to say my adieus but before that THANK YOU VERY MUCH for taking the time to write this story. It was great, I had a blast reading it to the very end. I hope that you get another story like this up and running, cause I'll be waiting for it ^_^. ARIGATO!ADIEU!THANKS!

Poor Lacus... She's jealous of Meer. Meer is getting all of Kira's attention. I think it's not in her character to be jealous. Lacus is usually portrayed as (TOO) perfect for her own good. So, getting her jealous here exhibits more of realism.

This was too short. Oh well... I still enjoyed it.

So that means that the book about Alexander and Freya isn't true?? Oh well, too bad!

Cagalli and Kira are awesome. They have amazing powers and together they're unstoppable. Cagalli has so much power inside her, so it's no wonder Gil wants her for his plan for Ragnarok.

Jean and Miriallia... I sure hope they'll be okay. Gil is to blame for all this! I hate him!

Touching moments, thrilling scenes, and the power--all truly overwhelming. The idea of combining futuristic characters and mythical beings was simply the best. Unique! And this chapter is one of my faves already. Great job.

Siblings vs. Siblings! Cool! Miriallia and Jean got controlled by Gil. That scoundrel Gil! Cagalli and Kira are in a real pinch, but I'm certain that they'll be all right.

Shinn's one overprotective father. He doesn't want Fllay to have a boyfriend. How cute.

Another great chapter. I was hoping for more romance, but the siblings are good. The interaction between Kira and Cagalli was natural. None of the characters are OOC. You really know how to deal with their personalities and put them into words. The scenes were well-explained. I really admire you for your incredible writing skills.

Athrun had me worried too. Well, mortals can't really go into the underworld unless their dead. Good thing Cagalli was there. Cagalli also helped Fllay a lot. The fight between Shinn and Fllay was intense and thrilling. Great job with that.

Wonderful fight scenes. Fllay is trying to gain control back. She even cried. I'm amazed on how powerful Shinn is. Go Shinn!

Fllay/Hel is working for Odin/Gilbert now. No! Gil is so evil. He should really die. Let Shinn beat him to a pulp.

Fight scene in the next chapter! Wow! I can't wait to read that. I want to read about Cagalli's power. She's awesome.

My guess was right... Auel did do something to Fllay in the past. Well, I hate him for that, but I still love his character.

Shinn is furious. He's really a protective father.

Oh! Meyrin-chan has a cute little school girl crush on Auel. What an interesting pair.

Shinn's precious daugther was taken away. Auel seems pretty interested in Fllay. I hope he doesn't do anything perverted to her. Shinn will have his head.

Athrun admires Cagalli very much. So cute.

Odin is sure causing a lot of trouble. Man, I hope everything will be all right. Die Odin!

A Forbidden rule? Oh no! Then what would happen to Cagalli and Athrun's relationship. They should scrap that rule. Cagalli may be a goddess but she's living with mortals now. Athrun and Cagalli forever.

Fllay doesn't seem to like Auel very much. I wonder... Did Auel hurt her in the past?

Cagalli is good. She managed to convince the teachers to let Shinn stay in school. I love her! Athrun had helped out too. Good thing Shinn has great friends to back him up. Hard to believe that a trouble-maker like him can get good grades. Well, it's because of Cagalli-sama right? It has to be.

Nice chapter. No action but still good.

Shy and sweet girls can sometimes snap and be scary when they're irritated. Meyrin was out of character, but it's understandable because she has a load of stuff in her mind. Poor Lunamaria... She got scolded by her little sister. Not that I care, though.

Woah... Like a dream! Athrun finally confessed his love for Cagalli and she loves him back. Time to celebrate. What a wonderful moment. I love the way you wrote their moment here. It was so thrilling and sweet. Well, I was expecting a kiss on the lips, but the kiss on the temple was okay too. Cagalli is so cute when she blushes. Hehe...

Stellar is the one to thank here. She's a sly cutie for matchmaking. Way to go.

Auel is so hot. He does seem to be fond of Basketball in Destiny. In the radio drama, he and Sting were talking about basketball and there were some pics of him with a ball. Auel's characters fit Tyr well.

Past is so like the present. Cagalli's right. In the past, she's friends with Shinn and until now they're still friends. I admire Shinn and Cagalli's friendship here. I wish they got along in the series.

Love the chapter.