hahhahahaha Sesshomaru and Jaken omg good one lol

Very interesting premise, although, I suggest you get a beta. You seem to have trouble with correct use of "in" and "on", and loads of other things as well. I kept getting confused with the dialogue because I don't think you're using the right words or using them in the right way.

One thing that irritates me is Kagome's characterization, she seems like a BIG IDIOT. I think that it is suppose to come off as funny but it makes her look stupid a lot of time and it gets exhausting after a while to keep dealing with.

That was such a great story. U have to consider to continue writing for the other chapters.
i believe i'm not the only one of the fanfic of yours... Who have been waiting for years just because some curiousty 'bout the rest of this story. (=^_^=)
i like it though.. Please update soon,'n u have to make 'it' long for having us been waiting far too long. I will always give u my support 'n wish u a good life... ^.~
yea,btw.. How i lov how this story began to flow,bout the characters of kagome 'n sesshou.
Keep workin' ne... >_<*

please for the love of all that is good in the world of fandom please update and add the next chapter! i have been waiting for well over a year for the next chapter and i have waited in vain. what is it that you need in order to do so? hell i would settle for you just writing a quick paragraph. but i NEED something!!

you can contact me at this e-mail adress

Oh wow... last edited Nov 14, 2006?
it's 2008 now... so it takes years for you to update?? wow... i thought i held the record in never updating!
Still I love the fic! First read it on but now that is gone i went to to find it and yay i did! I love this fic, please please please update soon!
Ja Ne!
~iloveinuyasha1

Your story is wonderful! Originality of the plot and perfect characterization of Sesshomaru (especially in AU) is extremely hard to find. You acclomplised a feat very few authors EVER can! Please, update soon! Keep-up-THE-AWESOME-work! (^_^)

I love how you took a typical fanfic. scenario and twisted it into something original. It's refreshing to see Kagome not as in a beautiful long legged ebony haired goddess but an average pretty looking woman who has a minor mental disorder ;p hahaha
Interesting story :)

aw! You know you have to CONTINUE, right?

lmfao, this story is awesome, hope u update soon!

wow ... what is kagme drinking and will they fall in love for real... up date soon plz

more god damn you!

oh! That was so good! I can't believe you left it off there. Please, please! Tell me that you are planning on updating this wonderful fic.

i love this story! please update soon!

OK THIS FIC IS REALLY BEAUTIFUL, THE IDEA IS ONE OF A KIND AND IF YOU ALREADY GIVEN UP WITH THIS FIC THEN COULD YOU I BEG YOU, ASK SOMEBODY TO CONTINUE IT FOR YOU. iTs just a waste of time waiting for nothing everyday. ive already lose faith in you

is this fic discountinued? just curious. please let me know.