lovin it. :) Would love to see more soon.

not really sure what to say about this story but when you update i think i could a better take on where the story is going however it is a nice sentament though i really like it but i am just not feeling it sorry.

wow i love this story amazingly done. i dont know why but i dont think Jin says a single word in this story the characterizations are dead on. I love mugen as a father so much. Its badass turned softie but not too soft as we can see when he slits hana's throat with a baby in his hand, great scene by the way. Anyway i love it so much definitely one of my favorites. Thanks and Update soon

HURRY UP AND FINISH THE STORY! I WANNA READ MORE!

I sure hope that you do indeed complete this story. Perhaps on your next school break! It is a very interesting story and the characterazation is spot on. Hope this comments helps you along. ^^

I wish you had continued this!

This is an excellent story. I hope you aren't going to abandon it.

NAW! love this story :P

I'm really loving this! your doing a wonderful job writing! keep up the great work!

please please please finish this story it is really good!

This is really a wonderful story. And I am unused to such a gentle caring Mugen, but they say a child changes every thing...

And it's been almost a year! Please come back to this and up date, it's a new summer break and I would love for a continuation of this story to be posted soon!

Update please

Alexithimia

...And the ominicity builds with the dark music...
So Hana was obviously gonna have to kick it all along, and now we're off on another epic voyage!...if you ever actually get off on it ;P

Aw cute start, and so far Mugens not an ass(much), quite rare in SC fiction. Ah SC Decemberists = heavenly! I must say you get such massive props for using Decemberists lyrics and titles, that I might have continued reading regardless, so lucky for me it seems to be pretty good :)

i'm still anticipating your update for chapter 5! i hope you had a good holiday(s).

You're an incredible writer, the characters are well, in character, and the story is really interesting! I love it.
I can't wait to see what happens next :]