This story was really good until the last chapter. You should have written it out! But it was very interesting.

The ending would have been good. I think.

D': nu pweaz continue da stowy fo ush! even if u has to make mostuh it upz :[

o nu dib! D: no kill him peaz

aww me lovey lovey love it :3

O_o I'd love to continue it if you don't want to. PM me with your permission and consent if I can ~

O_O what!? CRUD! I was really looking forward to this story! WAH!

YOU MUST CNTINUE! PLEASE! YOU MUST! It would be better to actually read it fully through than to have you just state what happens. No offense, if that was in any way offensive...

it ok, just you could of at lest update it or somthing nad not just say that. it make me sad. ='(
or you could just think of a new ending! well im still gonna add you to my favorites!...

Nice.

You know, I was actually thinking this story had potential until I got here. It's better incomplete. The last chapter ruins it.

I DEMAND THAT YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY! please...

I'll keep a look out for an update

Yay! I just started reading and... it ended ;_; Please write next chapters! Please! It's wonderful as for now ;]

very good fic! im really enjoying it...buutt...uhh dib does have a last name, its membrane, dibilton membrane.

anyuways really cool story!