Funny, and sort of sad, I like this, keep up the good work. Check your spelling.

Wow...as a major Luigi fan: Very well written, and nice flashback. I can't wait for more. Update soon please!!

Looks very good. Update soon.

I DEARLY hope that this wasn't just me- this wasn't bad at all. Far from bad- ifinity kms from bad! Be sure to update!

Great chapter! So Kirby landed on Yoshi Island eh? How did Kirby end up so hurt? Well...guess you'll exlain that in the next chapter. Can't wait for it. Update soon please!!

This is really good so far. I'm not usually a Mario person, but you actually make the story more realistic and interesting. Waiting for more! :)

This is a well written fic! I can't wait for more. Update soon please.

If Peach has a bodyguard, why has Mario been the one who has to save her from Bowser all the time?