Haha, I love the last line.

Good job with this!

YukinoKara

u should so continue thisXD

PLEZ WRIGHT MORE! I REALLY LIKE UR STORY! -

awesome! great job update soon _

Nice job. You don't see many manga based fics too often. It took me a second to figure out who Greed was, but then I remembered. You did wonderful. Keep it up.