You are an incredible writer - thank you for this wonderful story. :-)

I like how you followed the timeline of the anime, not having them meet except when they're shown in it, and filling in the blanks in between those meetings.

You focused a lot o Michiru's POV though, I'd have liked to have heard more of Haruka's.

Chapter 5.4 is by far my favourite. All that tension, beautifully written and I bet Pluto's face was a picture when she walked in. PLus there's Pluto practicaly being ordered to socialise : p

"Older, wiser and with even more sex appeal, Michiru at seventeen years of age fully understood the pull her body held over Haruka, and she was not beneath using it to her advantage."
^ Michiru through and through^


Showing the 4 of them as a family in the sil mil was nice, though I prefer reading that in present age. Like through what they went though in sil mil earned them a family together, which they'd never really had before. Cruelty and Fairness of Fate and all that jazz.

Self destructive Haruka wouldn't be out of place in Jekyll or a war movie. She was awesome.

You seem to have fun writing some of Haruka and Michiru;s lighter scenes but have more chemistry writing Rei/Mina stories. For which I am really glad because those stories rock.


I think I'll get back into reading some M/H stories.


BTW My new favourite line ... “**ingteaparty.”
My sentiments exactly.

I have just finished the most amazing fan-fiction I have ever read. You're story was so perfect. Well done! That's all I can say...Well Done!

This story is AMAZING! I've never read a fic this good before. Haruka and Michiru are my favorite characters and you have them written so perfectly, as if you know them. I'm so eager to read the rest, you have me enthralled! Very Very Well done.

i am just rediscovering the beauty of the HM tandem so i am truly sorry for the very late review. nevertheless, i can say that this has got to be one of the most beautifully made fanfic centering on HM's pre-SMS relationship. heh. you really have a great mind for producing top-rated fics like this. so because of that, i want to thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of art with us. now i'm going to read your current work, so...see you in a bit! :)

peace!

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::raises hand in guilt:: UH.. THIS is the second time ive read this story.. and im going for a third...i really.. really love it. everything i love about fanfic is right here

such an excellent end to a great story.

Awesome story. I look forward to reading other creations of yours in the future.

I have to say I just loved this story. It is one of the best I've read. Very nice way with the emotions between the two and the longing for a past love that can never be forgetten. Once again I wanted to say I really enjoyed this story. I look forward to seeing more stories from you. Keep up the good work.

I really like how you did that, working up to the point in the anime when Haruka became Uranus.
/me applauds

so sad poor Michiru *hugs* loved the update

Please update this soon! I really like this story although to be honest I thought you used the word "cobalt" far too often and it got repetitive ^^; but that didn't take from the story tho. like I said before please update soon. I want to see how this goes

Hi..I think you are doing a wondeful job. I like the way you write this story and the way you try to contruct their past. We all know that they will be together in the end but it is interesting to read how the author manages to create her own version. I love this story.

It's a fantastic portrayal of the thoughts and feelings experienced at that time, as well as a very plausible reason for why each character had acted the way they did. I liked what you had done with Setsuna and the advice she had given to Michiru in her past life. I thought it was very clever. Keep up the great work!

Your story is so good. I'll be waiting for chapter eleven.