Reviews for Friendly Rivalry

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Kat B - http://web-a-holic.... 2003-04-05 ch 11, anon.	abuseThe best M/L fic I've read yet! It rawks! keep it up! I love the whole match making thing...I'm starting to like Ben...i think he's in season 2 in DA. I just finished DA1 in my place...oh well. Keep on writing! :)
Libazeth 2001-10-05 ch 11,	abuseThis is really funnie! And good too!
lizziebunniehero 2001-09-04 ch 11,	abusevery cute:)
aegean 2001-07-10 ch 11, anon.	abuseDoes Ben come back in the sequel. I liked him. It would be great to see some sort of payback dished out by Logan and Max with respect to Ben. It would be funny. Anyway, I look forward to whatever you come up with.
star girl( i am not signed ... 2001-07-10 ch 11, anon.	abuseWOW GREAT..I AM GOING TO READ THE SEQUAL NOW!!!
a fan 2001-07-07 ch 11,	abuseBen is so awesome! what a great idea to take a picture. And here they are more great lines! 1.“I deserve at least a thank you fruit basket. Or a thank you BMW.” 2."he could still come back and beat the out of Logan if he managed to screw that up. Ben didn’t think even Logan would or could be that retarded."It was then Logan that Logan noticed the light purple post-it note stuck to his chest. Pulling one arm from behind his head, he plucked it off his shirt and read the note. ‘Logan, AND THE BEST ONE OF ALL: 3.I went back to my place to change clothes and didn’t want to wake you. Will be back in about an hour. You can stop thinking I ran away now. I didn’t. Love, Max’OK HERE'S ANOTHER ONE:4.“So that is what that sound is, your ego inflating. This is one of my all time favorite fics. And the sequel is already up! Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! I'm off to read it now.
a fan 2001-07-07 ch 10,	abusePlease wait a moment while I log in so I can put this on my favorites list... Oh! Good! It's already there. I'm such a smart girl. I must have put it on when I read chapter one but I didn't know it was going to be this good! The great scenes just keep coming and coming. Wow!
a fan 2001-07-07 ch 9, anon.	abuseI can't believe the great lines in this chapter. Here a just a few of my favorites. 1. and his second thought was…well he didn’t have a second thought, after he saw Max; he became completely incapable of any thoughts at all. 2.“If you could only see the look on your face. It is almost worth letting Cindy **-ify me.” 3. Logan had finally rolled his tongue back into his mouth 4. “Cindy? It’s Logan. I just wanted to thank you for that poor excuse for a dress you shoved Max into.” Oops! I think I listed most of the chapter! Where do you come up with this stuff? Oh! I asked you that already. It's unbelievably good! Technical note: it's 'neither' not 'either'. Awesome chapter once again!
a fan 2001-07-07 ch 8, anon.	abuseCindy pushed Max’s head between her knees. “Boo, what is the problem? We all knew you loved him way before you did. Breathe in, breathe out.” What a perfect touch of Cindy the relationship counselor! The bet was absolutely hilarious! And the "terror in the tower." Where do you come up with this stuff? It is soooooo good!
a fan 2001-07-07 ch 7, anon.	abuseYou are a master at the fun lighthearted moments. Totally enjoyable chapter!
a fan 2001-07-06 ch 6,	abuseI loved this chapter. The bleary eyes, the grumpy Logan, the humour, the sarcasm, the kiss. And what a kiss. Wow!
Alli Katt 2001-07-04 ch 11, anon.	abuseThis is one of the funniest fanfics i've ever read. if it wasn't ment to be funny, to bad, i still think it is.
Coco2 2001-07-04 ch 11,	abuseHehehehhehehehehehe, good job. I like Ben.
Nicole 2001-07-04 ch 11, anon.	abuseConsider yourself bugged. :-) I LOVED this story! I can't wait to see what your sequel will be!
BlueMoonRain 2001-07-03 ch 11,	abuseSequels are a good thing. I really enjoyed reading this. It had a great balance of humor and romance. Plus I love anything that is M/L friendly. Can't wait to read the next one.

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