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kags-sesshy
2007-12-26 . chapter 1
I love it!1
miky chan
2007-08-31 . chapter 1
that was so gd, inu was being sweet but he was totaly in charecter aswell, not ooc at all (i repeat myself alot *smile*) u rok
Kitten Kisses
2006-09-01 . chapter 1
...I say, I swear, if I get the urge to get back into this fandom from reading this, I'll die. I love this fandom, but I got tired of writing for it. But that might be because I was one of the first people to write for it. (Well, I came when there were less than 10 fics for it!)

You wrote "So if she wasn't sleepy, and she wasn't sleepy". Hahaha. I thought I'd point that out for you.

The part where you wrote about Kagome stomping on the bright green grass brought a huge grin to my poor face. I got a mental image of this happy field with flowers and butterflies, and then Kagome...like a big fiery bulldozer, comes plowing a line straight through it all. HAHA!

Aww, cute ending. Have you ever heard the song "Just to See You Smile"? It's a country song, by Tim McGraw. It's so sad, but so amazing. It's about a guy who is singing about how he'd do ANYTHING to make his lady smile. He quit his job and moved to be with her, he broke up when she wanted space, and he gave her good wishes (lying) when she found another man, but through the whole thing, he says he just wants to see her smile. For her to be happy. That's what this reminded me of, and as it's one of my absolute favorite songs, I had to mention it. I'm sorry if you don't like country music. But if you want to hear the song, email me, and I'll send it to you.

Anyway, it was cute. It really was. InuYasha might have been slightly OOC, but I could picture it all in my mind, and I was like "Aww!".

Great job here! I enjoyed reading this.
crystal.elements
2006-04-16 . chapter 1
Aw...definitely something worth reading. Just the right amount of fluff for Inuyasha without taking it too far [like you see in those mushy Inu fics with full-blown kisses and make outs and other totally OOC stuff]. Great job on this one! Er, I'm gonna have to make this short cause I'm off to the Easter Bash soon...keep it up! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories. :)
Onigiri_gnesipes
2006-02-21 . chapter 1
^^ i found your story by pure chance and i must say that i'm glad i clicked on the wrong link!
It's the first one-shot that actually made me want to keep reading from the top to the end thank you!
Gotta luv' Inuyasha,he's so cute without being out of character !
Thanks again and keep writing please!
reader/writer
2006-02-08 . chapter 1
I read your user and you wrote a lot of Pokemon fics. This Inuyasha is awesome...you shuold definitely do more.
Inume
2006-01-28 . chapter 1
Aw so cute i wish boys in this era would do that for girls. that would be soo nice. XD
well is this only going to be a oneshot? please let there be more! if you have any outher fics please tell me. thanks
_Inume
anonymous reader
2006-01-20 . chapter 1
that was cute, not too serious and it shows te great friendhip/bond between inuyasha and kagome. great job
keng
2006-01-05 . chapter 1
so nice. ^_^
its so sweet.
(**)Inu+Kags(**)
2006-01-05 . chapter 1
heyy-
YAY awesomee story=)
Write more lmao. lol BIi
'.'.'.Jesslca'.'.'.
2006-01-04 . chapter 1
Aw that was soute, even though Inuyasha was being sweet he was still in character, great job! ^_^
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only
2006-01-04 . chapter 1
KAWAII!
Annie Sparklecakes
2006-01-04 . chapter 1
This was so, so cute. I've finally gotten way into Inuyasha, and it was so kool to see a one-shot I wanted to read and realize YOU wrote it. -grin- Twas fantabulous!

Seriously, go write more. NOW ^^.
Crispina Echidna
2006-01-04 . chapter 1
Aw...that was so sweet ^_^
darkmoonfairy16
2006-01-04 . chapter 1
aw that was so kind of him and plz do a sequel u rock at writin stories!
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