I'm not sure if you'll read this because it seems like you write this story quite a few years ago but I'll write this review anyways. This was seriously one of the BEST stories I have ever read. No joke. I have been up for hours trying yo finish this story because I couldn't put it down. If this story was a real book I would totally buy it. I really hope you continue this story and or write a sequel to it. Until then I will be waiting in suspense. Thank you for the story!

Please, please write a sequel! I just discovered this and it's the absolute best!

Oh my, this is REALLY late, but I remember reading this in High School, and I just had to read it again now.

I love the story, and hope you are still planning to continue the sequel...me and my idle hopes, right?

I am always on the look out for more of Dragon's Bait fictions...and this is one of my favorites, by far!

Also: if you would like to respond to this, I do not use the email linked to this account anymore... rather send them to

(if you are so inclined to respond )

Please just one more chapter.a small epilogue anything will do!

Who is Dry-el, is that Selendrile?

Also, how do you pronounce Selendrile?

Is it like 'drill' or 'dryl'?

OMG! . I HAVE READ THIS COUNTLESS TIMES AND IT NEVER CEASES TO AMAZE ME! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL, IT'S TO GOOD TO BE LEFT AT THIS! 3

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!Thats all I gotta say :)

okay, i thought i had to convince for another chapter. i just saw the part of sequel for this story. yay cant wait

Okay, it's been forever since I actually read Dragon's Bait, but I remember enough to say that this story was insanly cool! :D I loved it. :D Can't wait to read the sequal. :D

Awesome story, I love it!

AAGGHHHH :o

I'm just gonna talk about the wwhole story...it was Ah-mazing

I was addticted..and I really can't wait for the sequel, if you're still doing it..I really hope so :D

The story was perfect.

Thank you so much 3

Just so you know, I love love love the first half of this story. All the stuff from the beginning to living in the cave to him throwing her out was amazing.

Atfer that the story sort of lost what made it interesting. Alys and Selendrile together and how they do things. I had to read about new people that I didn't really care about as I tried not to rush until Selendrile was back. Except for the other dragon, there was no one really interesting, not even Nora.

The ending was so unexpected and abrupt that it was kind of disappointing and lost any impact it might have had. It felt like you cut off the chapter right in the middle.

I read the chapters you have posted for the sequel and it looks like it could be an interesting story if you update again. I hope you do, and bring back some of that earlier writing you had in 'Lure.'

Brini

Gahgahgahgahaggah... the end?

*Shakes fist* Evil!

Grumble grumble... Awesome story!

Uhhhgg, you've got me all confused and torn and crushed. Poor Alys! I have to go cry now.

I realized halfway down the page that I was rushing, skim-reading, in order to get back to her being with Selendrile but then I made myself start over, not wanting to miss anything. I was so freaked out for her in the woods. I hope that pervy gy doesnt try anything.

All that stuff about "the new kid being a girl" is freaking me out! Haha, it's like they KNOW! O.o