This was intense. That's the only word I can think of. It's truly incredible how you make the story flow so well without use of dialogue or props. You also capture Hanabi's emotions perfectly, from worry to hero-worship and empathy and concern. I'm incredibly impressed how in-character you have her. You got just the right mix of mature, knowlagable, proud, innocent, curious and childish. You rock!

...Wow. This was good. And sad. But good. Hehe.
I really like how you ended this.

Keep up the great work.

Now that, I don't get. It's soo confusing! T-T
- but it was good.

Cool...

I actually read a fanfic with Neji blind before. Did you get this from there?

so sad. T_T great job