nice fic

woah that was...err.."interesting"

haha i liked how you put "now back to to the lemon you pervs" that made me laugh

XD

continue!

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*point of view of perverted audience* NO! DON'T STOP WRITING LEMONS! THIS CHAPTER WAS AWESOME! *end of p.o.v.* _ so what flavor was it at the end? lol. update soon please!

you sholdn't stop writing lemons. please update soon...

;]

UPDATE SOON!

AWESOME STORY!

I know I'm evil aren't I. Cuz I'm such a lazy ass, I never review. Blah. Well, since I'm reminded to review, I'll review. :D Yes, I forget ALOT or...say all the time. Hehe... Too much into a story can do that to a person. Don't worry. Happens to me all the time - what I just said and when people alert but DON'T REVIEW. You'd think I'd be sympathetic about something similar to my situation, but no. I just read. I'm so mean. So anyway, I hope you forgive my evil-no-reviewing-person-for-the-past-updated-chap ters self with this forgiving-YES-reviewing-person-that-hasn't-exactly -reviewed-the-last-updated-chapters review.

By the way, I love your story. It's very hard these days to find a decent fanfic once you've read a bazillion other decent fanfics. :D

your story gives me chills . hahaha ew i feel like such a perv xD haaha update soon please }

You already updated – tones of it too! The Angel and Demon fic sounds good. You're right about the highschool fics – I went on a spree of it once, and let's just say I've not been able to look at the title, much less read anymore highschool fics. You could do something else, how about a psychiatrist and patient? A master and a slave? Err...forget them, they sound too dark and angsty I have an affinity towards dark and angsty fics. Anyway...you're doing fine! More than fine. I liked the dialogues and other stuff in the stories – pure concentrated lemons in a fic are a turn off and an eyesore (no offense to anybody in particular), lemons are much more agreeable in small quantities, scattered and inserted a little here and there. It's like between drinking a nice glass of lemonade and a half glass of concentrated lemon puree – which one would you rather have? Does that even make sense to you? Am I ranting? Because I'm sure I sound like I am. Because it's 4am and I couldn't sleep and I have to go work at 8 and I'm hungry but I'm too lazy to get my ass off this chair in front of the comp to get something to eat and where was I again? Oh yeah...Sasuke's not very subtle is he? Hm, would Sakura comply? Maybe I'll stop here. Ja na. Oh...btw, I like your sense of humour – wicked ;D

SO HES JUST GOING 2 ASK HER IF SHE WANTS 2 HAVE SEX?

UPDATE SOON!

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that was a little direct...

lol UPDATE SOON!

I LOVE YOUR STORY lol love it love it love...but i can't belive you ended it with that sentence XD

LMAO!Wow so romantic Sasuke "lets have sex"

roflmfao

ok ok...OMG ITS THE APOCALYPSE!Veggies are evil...cept TOmatoes,Corn...and Bananas

yeah..

kk UPDATE SOON!WHE

LMAO XD lets have sex GAHAHA XD wow menn wells great ficcy soo farr

lol

i like it

LMFAO! hahah, i was cracking up through this whole chapter that i thought i would die from lack of oxygen! x] it's so freakin' funny. sasuke's last line...yeah xD