Nice take on the NejiHina pairing, but something's missing... oh yeah, I know, _the ending_. Any chances that you'd come back to this story eventually? You've gotten so far! :)

You were hoping for feedback on the smoochy scene, so here goes: I thought it was smooth going progress-wise, but suffered a bit from a sudden influx of typos and suchlike: amazing soft - amazingly soft, velveteen velvety?, fist kiss - first kiss (I hope!), of fire on fire?, nerves synapses - nervous connections or something such, I assume, bruashing - brushing.

As a general comment, it was a bit hard to tell apart the author's notes from the main text (there were sometimes quite long ones in the start and end of chapters, which makes the chapters difficult to browse to e.g. recall the plot, and often there weren't any separators between plot and author's note).

All that said, it was a pleasant read. Thanks for this and I hope you regain your inspiration and find the time to write more!

two words...Opposites attract. XD

I don't know HOW many times I've read this story.

I'm simply in LOVE WITH IT! this is by far the best nejihina story in the history of nejihina! I love how neji blushes a lot, its so cute to think neji has feelings for hinata! I just love everything about this fanfic. Best thing I've ever read. (over, and over, and over, and over again...)

nice

OMG! Whoa! I LOVE IT! Please don't tell me you'll give up! please continue it! Ah, such a romantic scene, full of romance and fluff! I really love this couple.

I believe that things should be said straight at the face! So,I feel the obligation to congratulate you (bows deeply) Indeed sucha wonderful story, the plot is really interesting, the drama and the descriptions are really well made. Also the description of their feelings and their actions are so realistic! An excelent job well done.

My friend, I hope we can see more talent displayed in this masterpiece. Until next time...

p.s. I shall be waiting for the next chapter eagerly .

That was quite entertaining. I really liked how you present the internal conflicts through their internal conversations. It was fun and the A/N were funny. Good Job!

Great story :D I love neji hinata

this is a really cute story. :]

that was a very cute scene. for ur first its really good. much better than i could write myself. now as i said in my previous review. PLEASE UPDATE!

can you please please o please update for chap 9? this story is too cute to let go of. there's not enough nejihina stories out there and practically none of them are finished. in fact this is one of the best nejihina stories written that i've read. the emotions are clear, and so are the events. i just wish that you would update and finish this. please. i'll get on my knees and beg.

lol liked ur authors note. btw i think sasuke and hinata are somewhat related too. kakashi says something about the uchiha clan being a branch from the hyuuga clan. plus neji and hinata are so cute together.

great story. nejihina deserves major love!

ah!when are you gonna update!you just...you just left us hanging!wa! *goes to a corner and sulk* i want more neji/hina moments!and and...wad IS the REAL mission?i don't believe tsunade would send one jounin and one chuunin to capture FIVE S-CLASS criminals...that's a horribly screwed match-up so SPILL!wad is tsunade and for that matter, hiashi trying to do?ahh!the suspense is killing me!

Interesting story! Liked it :-) can't wait to read the rest.

This is cool. Way better than what I could write anyway. I suck at love scenes. XD