wow so destructive ...

omg, wow. that last sentence made me want to review your story. beautiful and artistic.

Though i think it would be better using the names instead of the epithets you use, I still like.
Great description for the feelings. Great final setence.
Regards

that was so sad n so good

I loved it!

so angsty and good. i love the sequel like thing. the other one is good too you no silet or somethin. well anyways great story i love the angstyness!

Sarah: Oo! that was even wierder!

Oh, DAMN!

I got nothin'... ::shakes her head::

Aw. It's so sad yet sweet. The three of them together and broken. Such sweet bitterness. I read silence too, that's sad too. But the way that you wrote both is just so wonderful.

I liked this one as well. Loved the quote at the end," who else would want their broken souls, but them?". That was very cool

So sad. It makes me want to cry. I wonder how someone would be able to write something like this...

I love it.

This was so poignant and sad, but very well written!

This story really amazed me. Its so different, I love it for that. Great job.

"..Put ur tears on ice...or i'll swear i'll burn the city down and show you the light"

wow that was soo deep almost like a poem. I don't understand y u didn't get any reviews it was a pretty good story.