I liked this change of perspective. The language was a bit rough for my liking but I think it worked for those pitiful excuses for men.Good job. Thanks for sharing.

That was a good atory, and I can really see other teams thinking that about the boys. Sad, really, that what costs so much, but gives so much could be the cause of so much anger. Whoa, That was deep.

Great story, keep it up!

Woot! Wonderful, superb story! Smashing insight! Not all members of Team 5 are a$$e$ by the way.

Hm...I don't see what they learned, but it is a very big gap in how the teams work.

Is it cause Larabee got to choose his own men or is it cause Larabee made them learn to rely and trust each other? I can't wait to read your other M7 fics.

Later days.

Really enjoyed the story.

But hard to read. Really need some space between them 'thar paragraphs.

ooh, enjoyed this one too

interesting POVs. not ones usually seen in ficcies, but you handled them admirably. very bitter, bitter unpleasant men :)

cool story.

HA! That was great! I loved it. The outside perspectives were great. Really, the story was great and now I so can't wait for the rest of Odd Man Out! :)

Great story, Celeste! You are definitely becoming one of my fav writers. Keep up the good work and please, hurry with "Odd Man Out"!

HAHAHAHA! i love it...it's hysterical!...and it's very insightful look into team 7 from the outside. PLEASE FINISH ODD MAN OUT!

mwahahhahahahhah!

oh, I liked Erikson's perspective at the end. And I loved the closing remark. You got this one right too, even if the language was rather, umm, harsh? Now please, finish Odd man Out!

This was great. Kinda crude with the language, but hey, these are guys.

But, Celeste, I hate to break it to you, but you've touched upon a fanfic rule, and I really feel I must advise you of it.

The rule basically is that when you write in one fic about a previous injury to one of the guys, them in all fairness, you must then write a fic detailing how they got said injury.

You gave Ezra some woppers in this one. I would really like to see how they came about.

Sorry, but Ezra torture is a special hobby of mine.

Michelle

Great Story!I don't know WHY anyone wouldn't like it. Hope there's more "Odd Man Out" coming soon!

One word: COOL!