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New Year's Baby
2007-02-16 . chapter 1
Hi Leven,
Just wanted to let you know that I love this story. It's one of my favorite Roomies/Reela stories. And I've really enjoyed reading all your other stories too. Just read Matinee -- very sweet. Please keep writing -- looking forward to your next one!

:-) New Year's Baby
muser321
2007-01-26 . chapter 7
PERFECT. this was amazing, and while the seven deadly sins were all good and well, and this fic ended perfectly, please put up a sequel.
Invisible Shadowess
2007-01-16 . chapter 7
Nice ending!! i was waiting to see how this would end. Much of a change to the prevous chapters. all the other chapters Neela was indescive and unsure, and this last chapter, she is completely one humdred percent sure of herself.

nice chapter,
Anie
Erin Allen
2007-01-14 . chapter 7
I am so happy that you finished this! Loved it! You did a wonderful job with the seven deadly sins! Hope to see more from you soon.
mrsreynolds
2007-01-14 . chapter 7
Wow! This is a really great story. I love the way you've framed events around the seven deadly sins...very well handled. Plus, Neela ended up with the right guy, which is always good! Keep up the good work!
criss128
2007-01-12 . chapter 7
God, this was really good. I love this story and I think you did an amazing job. Can't wait to read the next you write
ravencrow neversmile
2006-07-26 . chapter 6
okay i am trying to be pushy here, i like this fic and have been waiting for ages for an update.lets face it lust is everyones fave sin.please,please update (big pout with puppy dog eyes)
MonDieu666
2006-06-10 . chapter 6
That leaves vanity and lust if i'm not mistaken. I can't wait and you must update asap! No really you must! pretty please.
MD
AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva
2006-06-09 . chapter 6
Loved, of course. I'll be sad to see this series end. The idea behind it was really creative. :) And even though I'll be sad to see this end, I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Invisible Shadowess
2006-05-28 . chapter 5
Wow. That's all I can say. I'll say it again. Wow.
Nehaalshrug
2006-05-07 . chapter 5
Hahahaha, gotta love the Seven Deadly Sins.
I like this! I really do. Which is SO weird because moping-in-love-Ray is *irritating* (although accurate, just about, at the moment) and here he is, and yet I don't find this irritating. Woo, well done. I still think Michael is being over-evilled but if I wrote the story nothing would ever even happen, they'd just all sit there in confusion, so please, ignore me.
"“Wait. You’re leaving?” Oh, he was evil. He was crazy. He was going to burn in hell" - I love it! Self-destructive-Ray amuses me. Crazy little man.

I especially like how everyone's so - well, witty - but in a real, this-could-be-a-person sort of way. After all they're doctors, they have to be fairly intelligent, so it's all - realistic and I like it. I also like the My-life-is-worse-than-Abby's-oh-dear-GOD train of thought Neela had, last chapter. That was funny.
-- I have run out of remotely interesting things to say (Could you tell?) So.. well done! And write more! If you were going to. Aren't there two more you have to deal with? (Although I suppose
chiksi
2006-05-03 . chapter 5
Truly divine.

Loved the authorial comments, the hints of sarcasm and cynicism which always come hand-in-hand with jealousy and wanting what you can't have.

Yes, brilliant. :)
Dreamallday
2006-05-03 . chapter 3
I hope you'll get them together by the time you get to lust.
Hoey
2006-05-03 . chapter 5
Take that Michael take that! And GO TO HELL!! *dancing on a pink cloud* "Ray hit Michael, Ray hit Michael.. OH my world is perfect!
MonDieu666
2006-05-03 . chapter 5
I'm with Ray but on a more positive note. Good Job, Ray! Fantastic chapter!
MD
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