The Story was sweet but you junmped around too much. You should have put more detail into Jonathon and Lex's journey back, you introduced Lex as delusional and all of a sudden he was fine. There were parts missing the story kind of felt rushed. Great idea and plot though.

What a wonderful idea! I never thought of SuperBo saving Lex, but it's perfect! I love this story a lot. Thanks for writing it and putting it up.

Nice story line, but a bit too jumpy.

This was a much better way, and I loved your little feminist rant at the beginning because it's just too true. Favourite line (the one that really made me giggle): "Of course I did. But guilt is sort of a mood-killer, you know?" Though I also liked the bit about Lex disbelieving Jonathon's presence. More please. Wonderful vignette.

very good! whana reade more about it.. =) so please hurry up!

Great job! I was a little skeptical at first when I read the summary. It was sort of confusing but things started making sense as I read the fic. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

perfect
beautiful and perfect and so what should have actually happened!